The most beautiful thing in my country
The most beautiful places in my country are the lakes in the Sahara desert. They are truly fascinating. There are many of them in the Libyan desert. I especially adore Gaberoun and Umm al-Maa. They are surrounded by sea of golden dunes and palm trees. How wonderful they are!
These lakes are too salty. If anybody swims in them, he easily floats. The scene of lakes in the midst of desert where there is nothing but sand sea gives me a great sense hope. They are is really one of the nature's wonders.
A trip to these marvelous lakes is definitely an exciting adventure.
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The most beautiful thing in my country
The most beautiful places in my country are the lakes in the Sahara desert. They are truly fascinating. There are many of them in the Libyan desert. I especially adore Gaberoun and Umm al-Maa. They are surrounded by a sea of golden dunes and palm trees. How wonderful they are!These lakes are too salty. If anybody swims in them, he easily floats*. The scene of lakes in the midst of desert where there is nothing but sand sea gives me a great sense hope. They are is really one of the nature's wonders.
A trip to these marvelous lakes is definitely an exciting adventure.
*just a comment of the style of this sentence. Writers nowadays are often asked to write neutrally with regards to gender. So, in your phrase, it would be more politically correct to write: "they easily float" or "if you swim in them, you easily float".
You have painted a beautiful picture. I would love to see these lakes!
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