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Wedding Ceremony. I attended my friend's wedding ceremony today. Bride is my friend, and she was so beautiful. The bride usually read a letter to her parents the end of the ceremony in Japan. It was the most emotional moment of the today's ceremony. She said thank you for raising her for 33 years, and she couldn't tell them how thankful she was. She also said when she debated about something, her father gave her some advices and it helped her so much. Since she was crying while reading, she couldn't read a letter smoothly. Most of the people also couldn't stop crying. Then,bride and groom gave flowers for their parents. She looked very happy and I was also happy to be there. It was a perfect ceremony.

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Wedding Ceremony.

I attended my friend's wedding ceremony today.
The bride is my friend, and she was so beautiful.
The bride usually reads a letter to her parents at the end of the ceremony in Japan.
It was the most emotional moment of the day's ceremony.
She said thank you for raising her for 33 years, and she couldn't tell them how thankful she was.
She also said when she was undecided about something, her father would give her advice and it helped her a lot.
Since she was crying while she read, she couldn't read the letter smoothly.
Most of the other people also couldn't stop crying.
Then, the bride and groom gave flowers to their parents.
She looked very happy and I was also happy to be there.
It was a perfect ceremony.
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Wedding Ceremony.

I attended my friend's wedding ceremony today.

I attended to me friend's wedding ceremony today.
Bride is my friend, and she was so beautiful.

The bride is my friend and she was so beautiful.

The bride usually read a letter to her parents the end of the ceremony in Japan.
It was the most emotional moment of the today's ceremony.

The bride usually reads a letter to her parents at the end of the ceremony in Japan. It was the most emotional moment of today's ceremony. 

She said thank you for raising her for 33 years, and she couldn't tell them how thankful she was.
She also said when she debated about something, her father gave her some advices and it helped her so much.

She stated that she couldn't tell them how thankful she was for raising her for 33 years. Furthermore, she includes that whenever she she is debating over something, her father gives her several advice that helped her so much.

Since she was crying while reading, she couldn't read a letter smoothly.
Most of the people also couldn't stop crying.
Then,bride and groom gave flowers for their parents.
She looked very happy and I was also happy to be there.
It was a perfect ceremony.

She couldn't read the letter smoothly since she was crying while reading. Most of the people couldn't stop sobbing either. Then, the bride and groom gave flowers for their parents. She looked very happy and I was as well to be there. It was a perfect ceremony.

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Thank you for your comment! I had really good time!
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That's awesome that you had a good time and the wedding was a success (although all that crying..). Congratulations to your friend.

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