A Perfect Day
today I woked up at 10 sharp and I moved to my work at 10:30 where I had my breakfast before starting work .then I finished my tasks at 5:30 I went home and had lunch and I joined my English open day class it was an amazing one we talked about "culture shock" and the change which accompany the travelling abroad and communication with strange people ,strange culture and strange community. I got a lot of information and I really felt happy specially when we played some games and learnt the basics of Spanish at the end of class, After I finished I called my brother and my friend to meet to join the football match we played very well I scored a goal and my brother scored two .we won one match and we draw in another. After finishing football I returned home with my brother and on our way we bought a pizza stuffing in cheese and vegetables . when we reached home we shared the pizza with our family .really it was a fatty day . now I am very happy.
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A Perfect Day
today I woked up at 10 sharp and I moved* to my work at 10:30 where I had my breakfast before starting work .then I finished my tasks at 5:30 I went home and had lunch** and I joined my English open day class. It was an amazing one we talked about "culture shock" and the change which accompanies the travelling abroad and communicating with strange people ,strange culture and strange community. I got a lot of information and I really felt happy especially when we played some games and learnt the basics of Spanish at the end of class. After I finished I called my brother and my friend to meet to join the football match. We played very well; I scored a goal and my brother scored two .we won one match and we tied*** in another. After finishing football I returned home with my brother and on our way we bought a pizza stuffed with cheese and vegetables . when we reached home we shared the pizza with our family .really it was a fatty day . now I am very happy.Don't forget to capitalize your sentences!!
*Change to walked/biked/drove
**Judging from the time I think you mean dinner or supper.
*** Sounds better in context
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