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Me and me
Hi! My name is Tit, I'm now 22 years old. I left university 8 months ago and I didn't get a job related to my studies.Then I took a class at English centre for three months, suddenly I'm really immersed in it, from now on I gave up my major and follow English with the dream that I will become a teacher. Well you know I'm really independent, I no longer rely on my parents so I work during the day and learn every evening, I don't have time for fun, all my free time I spend listening to English songs, BBC, movies in English...Talking about color, I like red best.My family is very normal, my parents are farmers, they don't earn lot of income from it, my sister studied accountancy but she got job as a worker, she got married 9 months ago and she will soon have a baby, my brother is a student he is tall , has dark skin and is not good at studying.
Back to me, I work at shoe company, I don't like my job , there is bad atmosphere there, people don't have enough good conduct including the administrator, it's not related to English, with English may be I can have a good job with a high salary. My goal this year is to speak English proficiently.
Hello Tit,
I think this is the longest text I have seen you write. In spite of all the corrections it is good. Most of the corrections are spelling mistakes - learn the pattern 'spend time verb+ing' and make sure that your times agree. We talked about past tenses before.
Best wishes
Bob
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