The stranger. Part 54. "Approaching the Island". Please, correct my mistakes
Sailing to the island we continued talking.
"Damien, I care for your mind... You have to keep calm if we want to overcome these troubles" Lisa said.
"I know about it. I strive..."
"I bielive, you can manage it."
We landed to the coast in the late evening. Lisa noticed that I was nervous. She recommended me to swim. So I Swimed in the sea till (the?) sunset. I felt better after the bathing.
"How are you? You look fresh" Lisa said
"Yes, I'm well. Will we spend the night here, on the edge?"
"Yes, I daresay. The gobling or other disgusting creatures might attack us again. The coast is the best place for defence
"I agree. Should we explore the island tommorow?"
"Yes, I think so." Lisa answered. At little later she continued: "However my tonight's dream told me that it will be the last day here. We have opportunity to return to our world"
"So, let's get ready to final wave. It could be hard"...
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The stranger. Part 54. "Approaching the Island". Please, correct my mistakes
We continued talking on our way to the island."Damien, I worry about your mind... You have to keep calm if we want to overcome these troubles" Lisa said.
"I know. I strive..."
"I believe, you can manage it." she continued
We landed on the coast in the late evening. Lisa noticed that I was nervous. She recommended that I take a swim. So I swam in the sea until the sunset fell over the horizon. I felt better after being on the water.
"How are you? You look refreshed" Lisa said
"Yes, I'm better now. Should we spend the night here on the edge?"
"Yes, I daresay. The goblins or other disgusting creatures might attack us again. The coast is the best place to keep safe.
"I agree. Should we explore the island tomorrow?"
"Yes, I think so." Lisa answered. A little later she continued: "However my dream last night told me that it will be our last day here. We have an opportunity to return to our world"
"So, let's get ready for the final wave. It could be hard"...
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