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EMAIL TO A ENGLISH FRIEND.
Hi Kate;
I have done a day trip two months ago. I went to the Bourne Castle and the Lake with my English class.
Firstly, the departure of the trip is between 8 a.m. and 10 a.m. daily, but I would recommend you that you went at 8 a.m. because it is less crowded with people.
The trip has a first stop at Bourne Castle, which is the most beautiful castle that I have never seen. Besides, you can do a guided tour with a volunteer.
In the midle of the day you could take a lunch at the restaurant, but I advise you that you take a picnic because it is very expensive.
After taking the lunch, you will go to the lake when you can do some water sports. If I were you I would try to do windsurfing because is very funny.
To sum up, this trip has reasonable prices with reduction for groups which have to have a minimun of 15 people. You can see your website.
I hope that I could help you.
Hugs and kisses
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I would like someone to help me to correct this writing. Thanks.
EMAIL TO A ENGLISH FRIEND.Hi Kate;
I have done a day went on a trip two months ago I went to the Bourne Castle and the Lake with my English class.
Firstly, the departure of the trip trip departs is between 8 and 10 a.m. daily but, I would recommend you that you went at 8 a.m. because it is less crowded with people.
The trip has a first stops at Bourne Castle, which is the most beautiful castle that I have never seen. Besides Also, you can do a guided tour with a volunteer if you like.
In the At midle of the day midday you could take a eat lunch at the restaurant, but I advise you that you take a picnic because it is very expensive.
After taking the eating lunch, you will go to the lake where you can do some water sports. If I were you, I would try to do windsurfing because is very funny.
To sum up, this trip has reasonable prices with reduction for groups which have to have a minimum of 15 people. You can see your view the website.
I hope that I could help you.
Hugs and kisses
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