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My dream. I had a dream last night. It was about Japanese actor "Junich Ishida" He is much older than me and married. He told me that we couldn't have relationship. And one of my friends said to me in the dream "Poor Hisako. Are you alright?" I was completely alright! This is because I'm not interested in him. I don't know why he appeared in my dream. But when I think back, it's a interesting dream.

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My dream.

I had a dream last night.
It was about the Japanese actor "Junichi Ishida"
He is much older than me I and married.
He told me that we couldn't have a relationship.
And one of my friends said to me in the dream "Poor Hisako. Are you alright OK?"
I was completely alright OK!
This That is because I'm not interested in him.
I don't know why he appeared in my dream.
But when I think back, it's it was a interesting dream.

 

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Well written!

There is no English word "alright", you can say "OK" or "all right" instead.

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My dream.

I had a dream last night.
It was about the Japanese actor "Junich Ishida"
He is much older than me and is married.
He told me that we couldn't have relationship.
Then, one of my friends said to me in the dream, "Poor Hisako. Are you alright?"
I was completely alright!
This is because I'm not interested in him.
I don't know why he appeared in my dream,  but when I think back, it was an interesting dream.

Good job! I made a few corrections :) Keep writing!

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My dream.

I had a dream last night.
It was about the Japanese actor "Junichi Ishida"
He is much older than me I and married.
He told me that we couldn't have a relationship.
And one of my friends said to me in the dream "Poor Hisako. Are you alright?"
I was completely alright!
ThisThat is because I'm not interested in him.
I don't know why he appeared in my dream, but when I think back, it was an interesting dream.


いつも通りひさこさんは面白い話がありますね！笑笑

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My dream.

I had a dream last night, a dream about a Japanese actress - Nobuko Miyamoto
She is slightly older than me and was married, but her famous director husband (Juzo Itami) died long ago. 

She told me that we couldn't have relationship, but I always knew that, although I really fancied her and her freckles.
One of my friends said to me in the dream "Poor laogui. chin up!
I was quite ok, I am used to such disappointments!
I do know why she appeared in my dream, I always loved Tampopo and Taxing Woman.
When I think back, it's still n interesting dream.


Please excuse me taking liberty with your writing! 

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My dream.

I had a dream last night.
It was about Japanese actor "Junich Ishida"
He is much older than me and married.
He told me that we couldn't have a relationship.
And one of my friends said to me in the dream "Poor Hisako. Are you alright?"
I was completely alright!
This is because I'm not interested in him.
I don't know why he appeared in my dream.
But when I think back, it's an interesting dream.

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