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An email for my friend Dear Mike, How's everything in Sweeden? I hope you are enjoying your new job and of course you new style life, It hasn't been long time since you left Mexico but, it seems like it was plenty time. You know, I am very happy for you. As about me, well, there is not much interesting to tell you. Although I was getting on fit these days, I had to be able to have a good condition as soon as posible, the reason was just because my boyfriend and I went hiking two weeks ago. Our destination was "Nevado de Toluca" mountain, to be honest even I did some exersise before I felt exhausted when I climbed the first meters, in spite of I got tired I enjoyed a lot this adventure. The weather was freeze all the time and it didn't matter, I could admire how beatiful is the nature, it was a different experience in my life. I had the opportunity to see how is everything from heights, I breathed a clean air, awesome views, absolutely is far better do outdoor activities than in the city. Can you imagine it? At work I do the necessary things, even though I want to face new challenges, also learn more things I won't have much progress here if I stay for long time, that's why I work in my personal projects so hard in preparation to get a better job. Great! One more time, I am pretty happy for you, and I hope one day I can visit you. That's all for now, send you a big hug. Please keep in touch with me as possible you can. See you soon, Jessica

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At work, I do what I have to. Although, I would rather face new challenges and learn more things.

I won't have much progress here if I stay for too long. That's why So, I work a lot on my personal projects to prepare
for
a better job.
Great! Once more, I am pretty (better: very) happy for you, and I hope one day I can visit you. That's all for now. 
Sending you a big hug. (I would end this with an exclamation mark - "!") Please keep in touch with me as much as you can.
See you soon,
Jessica

*** Not bad. Practice word order a bit more. It's common in English for adverbs and adjectives to come before the word they modify (unlike Spanish! D:). 

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An email for my friend

Dear Mike,

How's everything in Sweden? I hope you are enjoying your new job and, of course, you new lifestyle.
It hasn't been that long time since you left Mexico, but it seems like it was ages ago. You know, I am very happy for you.
As for me, well, there is not (better: isn't) much interesting to tell you. However, I have been getting on fit these days in shape recently (better: I have been exercising recently). I needed to be able to have in good shape condition as soon as possible, the reason was just because my boyfriend and I went hiking two weeks ago.
Our destination was the "Nevado de Toluca" mountain. To be honest, even though I have been some exercising, 
I felt exhausted when I climbed the first few meters. in spite of Despite the fact that I got tired (better: Despite my exhaustion), I enjoyed this adventure a lot. The weather was freezing all the time, but it didn't matter because I could admire how beautiful the nature was. It was a unique experience in my life (better: for me).
I had the opportunity to see how everything is from high up. I breathed the clean air and enjoyed the awesome views. 
It
is so much better to do activities outdoors than in the city. Can you imagine it? (This isn't an expression in English. Would recommend this to convey same meaning: If only you could be here to see.)

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I'm happy you like mountains and I enjoy reading your letter to your friend =)

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