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what a pity! The small story happened, when I was about twenty-seven. One evening , I as usual went out for a walk after dinner. As passing the road crossed in the front of a hotel, I happened to meet a girl who I just knew several days ago . she seem to want to fall in love with me. In fact ( Actually) I was not interesting to her at all, who I picked up a girl at a pub last Friday , and she seem to be a real tease. she was employed in a record company (store). ((she happened to quit his company this afternoon)) 'I left my employ after an argument, ' she complained. "This job," she later complained to me,"is taking all the edge off my personality." 'I think it's a pity ', I replied to her, when I heard about it, ' you are just fit for the job. then she complained of being out of sorts . 'I heard that there was a quite cozy pub nearby " , she said, " should we go for a drink? " " sorry, I didn't want to go there," I replied. but she importuned me to grant her request, which I was not prepared for. In the pub she ordered many expensive wines . Should I paid the bill for her ? I wondered. When I realized it, I thought that It's nearly time to leave. So I said to her with smiles, " Prepare yourself for a nasty shock! " . "To what events did your remarks relate? " she asked. " I have just received a message from my a friend ." I said to her , "he who was a handsome and hot man want to come here , but he didn't know here. I must go out to meet him. " " Wow, let him come quick here" . she said excitedly. So I walked out of the pub and went back home to sleep.

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what a pity!

The short story happened when I was about twenty-seven. One evening, I went out for a walk after dinner as usual. While crossing the road I walked in the front of a hotel and happened to meet a girl who I met just several days before. She seemed to have fallen in love with me. Actually, I was not interesting to her at all. I had just picked the girl up at a pub the Friday before, and she seem to be a real tease. She was employed at a record store.

(She happened to quit her company that afternoon.)

"I quit my job after an argument," she complained. "This job," she continued, "is killing my personality."

"That's a pity ', I replied, "you are perfect for the job." After that, she complained about feeling out of sorts.

"I heard that there is a pretty cozy pub nearby," she said, "shall we go for a drink?"

"Sorry, I don't want to go there," I replied, but she pressed me to grant her request, which I was not prepared for. 

In the pub she ordered many expensive wines. "Should I paid the bill for her?," I wondered. When I realized, I thought, "It's almost time to leave." So I said to her with a smile, "Prepare yourself for a huge shock!"

"What are you talking about?" she asked.

"I just received a message from a friend of mine," I said to her, "who is a hot, handsome man and wants to come here, but he can't find this place. I have to go out and meet him."

"Wow! Bring him here quick!" she said excitedly.

So I walked out of the pub and went back home to sleep.
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thank you for so much concern !
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What a pity!

The small story happened, when I was about twenty-seven. One evening , I as usual went out for a walk
after dinner. As passing the road which crossed in the front of a hotel, I happened to meet a girl who I just knew several days ago . she seem to want to fall in love with me. In fact ( Actually) I was not interesting to her at all, who I picked up  at a pub last Friday ,

and she seem to be a real tease. she was employed in a record company (store).
((she happened to quit his company this afternoon))

'I left my employ after an argument, ' she complained. "This job," she later added  complained to me,"is taking all the edge off my personality." 'I think it's a pity ', I replied to her, when I heard about it, ' you are just fit for the job. then she complained of being out of sorts . 'I heard that there was a quite cozy pub nearby " , she said, " should we go for a drink? "
" sorry, I didn't want to go there," I replied answered. but she importuned me to grant her request, which I was not prepared for.

In the pub she ordered many expensive wines . Should I paid the bill for her ? I wondered. When I realized it, I thought that It's nearly time to leave.

So I said to her with smiles, " Prepare yourself for a nasty shock! " . "To what events did your remarks relate? " she asked. " I have just received a message from my a friend ." I said to her , "he who was a handsome and hot man want to come here , but he didn't  doesn't  know here. I must go out to meet him. "

" Wow, let him come quick here" . she said excitedly. So I walked out of the pub and went back home to sleep.
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Awesome story!
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what a pity!

The small story happened, when I was about twenty-seven. One evening , I as usual went out for a walk after dinner. As passing the road crossed in the front of a hotel, I happened to meet a girl who I just knew several days ago . she seem to want to fall in love with me. In fact ( Actually) I was not interesting to her at all, who I picked up a girl at a pub last Friday ,

and she seem to be a real tease. she was employed in a record company (store).
((she happened to quit his company this afternoon))

'I left my employ after an argument, ' she complained. "This job," she later complained to me,"is taking all the edge off my personality." 'I think it's a pity ', I replied to her, when I heard about it, ' you are just fit for the job. then she complained of being out of sorts . 'I heard that there was a quite cozy pub nearby " , she said, " should we go for a drink? "
" sorry, I didn't want to go there," I replied. but she importuned me to grant her request, which I was not prepared for.
In the pub she ordered many expensive wines . Should I paid the bill for her ? I wondered. When I realized it, I thought that It's nearly time to leave.

So I said to her with smiles, " Prepare yourself for a nasty shock! " . "To what events did your remarks relate? " she asked. " I have just received a message from my a friend ." I said to her , "he who was a handsome and hot man want to come here , but he didn't know here. I must go out to meet him. "

" Wow, let him come quick here" . she said excitedly. So I walked out of the pub and went back home to sleep.

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