Please help me to correct my homework 1
Today we met with you because we want to present the various proposals and ideals to help achieve decisive changes and thus positively influence our society.
It is very important to establish rules governing the behavior of each individual, as long as their rights are respected. Understanding individuals as all sentient beings possessing consciousness, have their own interests and therefore are subjects of law.
It is essential to respect the natural habitat of all, understanding that there are animals of other species that possess these qualities and with whom we share the planet. It is very important to emphasize promote respect for the most defenseless, animals, children and the elderly, create stronger for those who violate the integrity of these sanctions.
Violence always begins towards the weakest and we want to eradicate violence in our country.
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Please help me to correct my homework 1
Today we want to met meet with you because we want to present the various proposals and ideals in order to help achieve decisive changes, and thus positively influence our society.It is very important to establish rules governing the behavior of each individual, as long as their rights are respected. Understanding individuals as all sentient beings possessing consciousness have their own interests, and therefore are subjects of law.
It is essential to respect the natural habitat of all, understanding that there are animals of other species that possess these qualities and with whom we share the planet. It is very important to emphasize and promote respect for the most defenseless, animals, children and the elderly. To create stronger.......(stronger ?) for those who violate the integrity of these sanctions.
Violence always begins is always targeted towards the weakest and we want to eradicate violence in our country.
"..create stronger for those who violate the integrity of these sanctions" << This part of the sentence doesn't make sense because there is no Subject in the sentence.
Great piece of writing! It was very interesting for me to read. Well done!
Just remember to always have a "Subject+Verb+Object" in every sentence (SVO). Also, be careful not to make sentences too looooooonngg... it's difficult for the reader to follow. :P
Otherwise, fantastic work! Keep up the wonderful writing!
Thank you for letting me correct your work :)
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When written, was this meeting in the past or future?
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