happy and distracted
Today is women‘day ，my brother and sister visit me.we have a delicious dinner.the time is short but we are very happy.
Recently，i have a trouble.i am very distracted.i cant share it with anyone,how can i do?And the summer is coming，i am losing weight for wearing beautiful clothes,haha
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Happy and distracted
Today is Women‘s Day，my brother and sister came to visit me. We had a delicious dinner. the time is short We were short on time but we are were very happy.Recently，I have a trouble I've been having/I've been dealing with some problems. I am very distracted/It's very distracting. I can't share it with anyone, how what can I do? And the summer is coming，I am losing weight for wearing so I can wear beautiful clothes, haha.
Good job! Remember to capitalise 'I' and to leave a space after punctuation marks! Can you confide in any close friends and tell them about your problems? 加油！
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Happy and Distracted
Today is Women‘s Day. My brother and sister visited me. We have had a delicious dinner. Even though the time is short, but we are very happy.Recently，I have had a some trouble. I am very distracted. I can't share it with anyone. how can i do What can I do?And The summer is coming，and I am losing weight for wearing to wear beautiful clothes,haha
Great job! Remember never to begin a sentence with "and"
For example,
"What can I do? And the summer is coming..." X
"What can I do? The summer is coming.." :) much better!
Have a nice day!
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