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I read a story about a Korean girl who arrived to USA knowing almost no English, she used the pressure of that situation to learn English, in four years she mastered that language, actually in that period of time she won some academic awards. She used all her experiences to write a book thinking in the people who was suffered the same she had.
I liked a lot this story because is a real life story about how, with hard work you can do whatever you want. I liked the way she handled the situation, and her mindset about take risks.
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I read a story about a Korean girl who arrived to in the USA knowing almost no English. She used the pressure of that situation to learn English and in four years she mastered the language. actually In fact, in that period of time she won some several academic awards. She used all of her experiences to write a book, thinking in the people who was suffered keeping in mind those who had shared the same experiences as her she had.I liked a lot this story a lot because it is a real life story about how, with hard work, you can do (achieve) whatever you want. I liked the way she handled the situation and her mindset (attitude) about taking risks.
In your final two sentences, you can swap 'do' with 'achieve' and 'mindset' with 'attitude'. Do and mindset are not, however, incorrect.
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