Is it better to shop in small local shops or big supermarket? (essay)
In today's world, all people prefer to buy everything in supermarkets and small shops are disappearing.
On the one hand supermarkets have more brands and a wide variety of fresh produce than small shops, and on the other hand shop assistants in local shops are more polite and friendly. Many people usally but daily products like bread in small shops because they meet the vendor.
However, big supermarkets are your wallet friends! they have discounts and sales in a lot of goods. Futhermore their products are cheaper than small shops, which they can't afford to reduce their prices.
Actually, there are a lot of Street markets where you can see artesanal products in the stalls, in addition sellers try to bargain with you their prices.
In my opinion, supermarkets are powerful, but small shops have better workers and the street markets have unusual products, although they are a bit pricey.
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Is it better to shop in small local shops or big supermarket? (essay)
In today's world, all people prefer Everyone preffers to buy everything in supermarkets and small shops are disappearing.On the one hand supermarkets have more brands and a wide variety of fresh produce than small shops, and on the other hand shop assistants in local shops are more polite and friendly. Many people usually buy daily products like bread in small shops because they meet the vendor.
However, big supermarkets are your wallet friends! they have discounts, and sales in and a lot of goods. Furthermore their products are cheaper than the ones in small shops, which as they can't afford to reduce their prices.
Actually, there are a lot of Street markets where you can see artesanal products in the stalls, in addition sellers try to bargain with you their prices.
In my opinion, supermarkets are powerful, but small shops have better workers and the street markets have unusual products, although they are a bit pricey.
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Is it better to shop in small local shops or big supermarkets? (essay)
In today's world, all people prefer to buy almost everything in supermarkets and small shops are disappearing.
On the one hand, supermarkets have more brands and a more wide variety of fresh produce than small shops, and on the other hand shop assistants in local shops are more polite and friendly. Many people usally buy daily products like bread in small shops because they meet get to know the vendor.
However, big supermarkets are your wallet's friends! They have discounts and sales on a lot of goods. Futhermore, their products are cheaper than small shops, which they since the shops can't afford to reduce their prices.
Actually, there are a lot of street markets where you can see artesanal products in the stalls, in addition, sellers try to bargain with you over their prices.
In my opinion, supermarkets are powerful, but small shops have better workers and the street markets have unusual products, although they are a bit pricey.
Comments: It is better not too use words like "all" or "every" unless you literally mean these words without exception. We know that not "ALL" people prefer to buy from supermarkets. There are some people who prefer to not step foot in a supermarket. For that reason I removed the word "all" and added the word "almost" before the word "everything."
By saying "which they" after speaking of two different subjects, supermarkets and small shops, you are not clearly stating which subject you are referring to as "they." It is better to restate which one you mean in this case to make it clear.
I hope you find these corrections and comments helpful. Please ask if you have any questions about them.
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