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My visit to a doctor These days’ modern medicine services help people to fight against with hard diseases. We have a traditional and alternative medicine. I strongly believe that balance between them can help more effectively and my doctor agrees with me. I have visited a doctor recently, because I think I have caught a cold. I had a dreadful headache, pain in muscles; I was faint, feel weak and looked like a white snow. In addition I had a runny nose and sore a throat. Therefore I make an appointment with a doctor- general practitioner. As you know in hospital work a lot of specialists such as: GP, surgeon, cardiologist, and neurologist. I have decided to visit a GP and if he prescribed another specialist, I have followed the advice. During the examination, my doctor takes a temperature, fill pulse, take a blood pressure and sound my heart and lungs. Eventually he prescribed me some herbals, cough medicine, drops and moreover to take an X-ray for exclude a pneumonia. I wouldn’t dispute this and have taken an X-ray. Indeed my doctor confirms that it’s not pneumonia and my lungs are well, then he recommends following his prescription which he is taken earlier. After 2 weeks hard cure at home I feel more better and recover from cold. Taking all these points into consideration I would say that balance between alternative and tradition medicine create a magic and help to combat more diseases.

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My visit to a doctor

These days’ modern medicine services help people to fight against with hard diseases. We have a traditional and alternative medicine. I strongly believe that balance between them can help more effectively and my doctor agrees with me.
I have visited a doctor recently, because I think I have caught a cold. I had a dreadful headache, pain in my muscles, I was faint, felt weak and looked like a white snow. In addition I had a runny nose and sore a throat. Therefore, I made an appointment with a doctor, a general practitioner. As you know a lot of specialists such as: GPs, surgeons, cardiologists, and neurologists work in hospitals. I had decided to visit a GP and, if he prescribed another specialist, I have would followed the advice.
During the examination, my doctor took my temperature, felt my pulse, took my blood pressure and sound listened to my heart and lungs. Eventually he prescribed for me some herbals, cough medicine, drops and moreover, he advised me to have take an X-ray taken to for exclude a pneumonia.
I wouldn’t dispute this and have taken had an X-ray taken. Indeed my doctor confirmed that it’s not pneumonia and my lungs are well. Then he recommended following his prescription which he is taken gave me earlier.
After 2 weeks hard cure at home I feel more better and have recovered from my cold. Taking all these points into consideration, I would say that balance between alternative and traditional medicine creates a magic and helps to combat more diseases.

 

Comments: You need to stay consistant with the tense of your writing. You need to speak in the present or the past, not both together. We do not use "against" and "with" together. We also do not take x-rays unless we are the x-ray technition. We have x-rays taken.

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