Last week
On Thursday I went to eat with my best friend, that she is my roommate, in an Italian buffet in the shopping centre. Then, I attended classes of nutrition and when finished, my friends called me to go to the "espicha". I was there until 5 morning.
On Saturday, I celebrated my birthday with my family. They gave me a shirt, a jacket, a jumper, some trainers of running and a lot of money. My middle sister made a video with photos when I was younger and people around me. I cried a lot.
On Sunday, I played a football match in Trobajo and we lost. The coach was dissapointed because he said that we had to win because we would go up in the ligue, we would be third. It was a hard match, there were a lot of faults and two players almost hit. I received a kick on the stomach and I have the heels marked on my leg.
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Last week
On Thursday I went to eat with my best friend, that she is my roommate, in an Italian buffet in the shopping centre. (This is the British spelling of "center" which is how we spell it in America.) Then, I attended classes of nutrition classes, and when I finished, my friends called me to go to the "espicha". I was there until 5 in the morning. (comment: correctly written in English, numbers 0-10 are written as words; five in the morning. From 11 upwards we can use numerals.)
On Saturday, I celebrated my birthday with my family. They gave me a shirt, a jacket, a jumper, some running trainers of running and a lot of money. My middle sister made a video with photos from when I was younger and people around me. I cried a lot.
On Sunday, I played a football match in Trobajo and we lost. The coach was dissapointed because he said that we had to win because we would to go up advance in the league, we would be third. It was a hard match, there were a lot of faults and two players almost hit each other. (You can also say "almost collided.") I received a kick in the stomach and I have the heels marks on my leg.
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Last week
On Thursday I went to eat with my best friend, that/who she is my roommate, at an Italian buffet in the shopping centre. Then, I attended nutrition classes and when finished, my friends called me to go to the "espicha". I stayed there until 5 in the morning/a.m.On Saturday, I celebrated my birthday with my family. They gave me a shirt, a jacket, a jumper, some trainers for running/ running trainers and a lot of money. My middle sister made a video with photos of me when I was younger with people around me. I cried a lot.
On Sunday, I played a football match in Trobajo and we lost. The coach was disappointed because he said that we had to win in order to go/climb up in the ligue; we would have been third. It was a hard match, there were a lot of faults and two players almost fighted (I think?). I received a kick on the stomach and I have studmarks on my leg.
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Last week
On Thursday I went to eat (for lunch/dinner would sound more natural!) with my best friend, that she (who is my roommate) to an Italian buffet at the shopping centre. Then, I (or "I then") attended classes of a nutrition classes lecture (word is more commonly used!) and when it finished, my friends called me to go to the "espicha". I was there until 5 in the morning (or "5 am").On Saturday, I celebrated my birthday with my family. They gave me a shirt, a jacket, a jumper, some a pair of trainers (or "running shoes") of running and a lot of money (or "cash", more commonly used). My middle sister made a video with photos of me from when I was younger and of friends and relatives people around me. I cried a lot.
On Sunday, I played a football match in Trobajo and we lost. The coach was dissapointed disappointed because he said that we had to win because we would go up in the ligue league (we would be third). It was a hard match, there were a lot of (or "many") faults and two players almost hit each other (or "got into a fight"). I received a kick on got kicked in the stomach and I have the boot's studs heels marked on my leg.
Minor mistakes, I've put in a few comments in pink to include other ways of saying what you've written. But it makes complete sense anyway! I'm not sure about the relationship between you being kicked in the stomach and you having marks on your leg from someone's shoes, did you get kicked multiple times?! :O I have crossed out anything I thought could go away and highlighted whatever I've typed in myself. Good job!!!!
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