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A formal e-mail From: Hugo Lopez [[email protected]] To: Tennis lessons in Canada [[email protected]] Subject: Information about lessons Dear Sir/ Madam I am writing to ask for information about your tennis lessons. I am interested in learn to play tennis, so I would like to take intensive lessons of twice to week. I am 20 and I study at Cesar Vallejo University. I know the rules of tennis, so It will be really easy, but is necessary improve my play and technique. I have looked at your website, but there is no information about intensive lessons. Could you please send me information about date , prices and where are your Instead of practices? If I have a friend there will be discounts? I look forward to hearing from you. Sincerely, Percy Escobilla

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A formal e-mail

From: Hugo Lopez [[email protected]]
To: Tennis lessons in Canada [[email protected]]
Subject: Information about lessons

Dear Sir/ Madam,


I am writing to ask for information about your tennis lessons. I am interested in learning to play tennis, so I would like to take intensive lessons of twice to week (twice a week). I am 20 and I study at Cesar Vallejo University. I know the rules of tennis, so It will be really easy, but it is necessary to improve my play (skills) and technique.

I have looked at your website, but there is no information about intensive lessons.
Could you please send me information about dates, prices and where are your Instead of practices? If I have a friend,  there will will there be discounts?

I look forward to hearing from you.


Sincerely,

Percy Escobilla


Things I wrote in purple are suggestions although I am not sure what you were trying to say. I wish you the best of luck!


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