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On chosing Friends A life without a friend is a life without a sun.Friend is neccessary in one's life.On chosing friends,some of us choose friend who are similar to us,others choose friend who is different from us.In my opinion,I prefer to choose a friend who is similar to me although a friend who is different will lead me to fully enjoy a new life. We can achieve mutual understanding if my friend is similar to me.I have a best friend ,she is very much like me,which lead us feel comfortable with each other and may understand each other’s feeling .Whenever I am sad or happy,she not only know my feeling but also know how to share with me.That it is, the essential points for friend is understanding and share happiness and sadness. If I choose a friend similar to me, there is no doubt that we will share many common interests.Based on the same views about things,we may appreciate and enjoy the same kind of things.On the contrary,she will dislike what I appreciate and enjoy because of the disagreement if a friend is different from me. Thus,I will choose a friend who is similar to me rather than a friend differ from me.

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On Choosing Friends (you may use either capital letters or lowercase letters for both 'choosing' and 'friends')

A life without a friend is a life without a sun. Friends are is necessary in one's life. When it comes to choosing friends, some of us will choose a friend who is are similar to us, while others will choose a friend who is different from us. In my opinion, I prefer to choose a friend who is similar to me, although a friend who is different will help lead me to fully enjoy a new life (or "new experiences").

We can achieve mutual understanding if my friend is similar to me. I have a best friend, she is very much like me, which lead us means that we feel comfortable with each other and understand each other’s feelings. Whenever I am sad or happy, she not only knows my feelings, but also knows how to share with me. So, the essential points for friendship are is understanding and being able to share happiness and sadness.


If I choose a friend similar to me, there is no doubt that we will share many common interests. Based on the same views about things, we may appreciate and enjoy the same kinds of things. On the other hand, if a friend is different from me, she will dislike what I appreciate and enjoy what I disagree with. 


Thus, I will choose a friend who is similar to me rather than a friend who is different from me.

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