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Need a proper grammar Hi Im Richie 27 years of age from Cebu City, Philippines. Im a self employed, breadwinner and the eldest of my sibblings. We live without my father because of having another family for almost a decade which I take all the responsibilities since when I was a 20 years old. I stopped my studies and find a job here in Philippines which its my decision because its really hard without income in our family and my sibblings they're still studying so I decided to look for a job and give them a better future. When I reach at the age of 23 years old I decided to work in abroad in Saudi Arabia for almost 4 years there because my sibbling they get into college and we know that college is really expnsive so I workhard for them and to continue there studies. All of these will be worth it and im proud of it because they grown without hunger and they happy of course of what they live right now.

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Need a proper grammar

Hi, I'm Richie. I'm 27 years of age. I'm from Cebu City, Philippines. I'm a self employed, breadwinner and the eldest of my sibblings. We live without my father because we have had another family for almost a decade,  for which I have had all the responsibility since when I was a 20 years old. I stopped my studies and found a job here in the Philippines, which its my decision because it's really hard to live without income in our family. In addition, my sibblings are still studying so I decided to look for a job and give them a better future. When I reached the age of 23 years old I decided to work in abroad in Saudi Arabia. I have been there for almost 4 years there because my sibblings got into college and we know that college is really expensive. That's why I work hard for them and to continue their studies. All of this will be worth it and I'm proud of it because they have grown up without hunger and they are happy because of what the way they are living right now.

Good job, Richie!

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Guys pls help me to correct my paragraph..

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