24 years old
My 24 years old birthday have just passed. Actually, birthday isn't pleasant to me this time.
I have just graduated last year. At the beginning, I was enthusiastic to pursue my goal and career. However, my aspiration seems very far away from me after few defeats. An now, I can only compromise the fact and find a job that isn't following my passion.
Fortunately, I have't gave up my aspiration, I would continue my effort and try again.
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24 years old
My 24th birthday has just passed. Actually, birthday wasn't pleasant to me this time.I have just graduated last year. At the beginning, I was enthusiastic to pursue my goal and career. However, my aspiration seems very far away from me after few defeats. And now, I can only compromise the fact and find a job that isn't following my passion.
Fortunately, I haven't given up on my aspiration and will continue taking efforts and keep trying.
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24 years old
My 24 years old birthday have just passed. Actually, birthday isn't pleasant to me this time.I have just graduated last year. At the beginning, I was enthusiastic to pursue my goal and career. However, my aspiration seems very far away from me after few defeats. An now, I can only compromise the fact and find a job that isn't following my passion.
Fortunately, I have't gave up my aspiration, I would continue my effort and try again.
24 years old
I just had (or celebrated) my 24th birthday. It wasn't a very happy one.
I graduated last year. Right after graduation I was excited about my career and pursuing my goals/dreams. However, I've suffered a few set backs and now that dream job seems almost unreachable. I've had to settle for a job I'm not passionate about.
Fortunately, I have't totally given up, I'm still trying and someday I will get there.
What you wrote is perfectly understandable, but I changed some things to make it sound more natural. Good Luck! Don't stop believing!
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