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Do you like running ? On Friday, I stayed up to study accounting for 4 hours. I'm so sleepy and a bit tired because I had a meeting before that. I back to my room at about 1:30 am and study later at about 2:00 am. In the meeting, we had to make props for march event for today in conjunction with college's sport day. Last night also we have to continue doing our props and I came late, hehehe. I had to study back my basic accounting because I really don't understand what the lecturer taught me in the class and I don't want it happened again. I should study more and complete my assignments. Today is the sport day! We started with a march event and every team did their best cheers. I really had fun and tried my best to cheer because I don't want my team look gloomy, hahaha. At least I need to show the teamwork, hehehe. I think everyone will remember how much fun is their student life. Next we had aerobics, It's really fun but I think the time for it is too short. I just feel excited and it's end already. After that, we had running event. It's not far, maybe around 1 KM ? Since I'm rarely run or exercise, so I tried my best. It's quite tough for me because I feel tired quickly if I did long distance running. I got number 43 out of 100++ , it's not bad right? hahaha. I thought that I will get number over 100. I remembered that when I was in secondary school, I can't run steadily for more than 400 meters. Even 200 meters is tiring, hahaha. I wonder how people can running steadily for a long time. I really want to try long distance running like marathon once. But I think I need a lot of practise especially how to control my breathing. I'm easily feel tired, it is because I'm rarely exercise ? What do you think ? Can you do long distance running ? If you can, it is because you exercise regularly or you always join marathon events or you are long distance person ? hahaha After run, we had volleyball and chess match which I did not participated, hehehe. We have closing ceremony, but I don't know what time the ceremony. * Thank for reading, I hope you can help me to make corrections ? :)

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I remembered that when I was in secondary school, I can't couldn't run steadily for more than 400 meters. Even 200 meters is was tiring, hahaha. I wonder how people can running steadily for such a long time distance. I really want to try long distance running like marathon for once. But I think I would need a lot of practise especially on how to control my breathing. I'm easily feel tired I feel tired easily - it is is it because I'm I rarely exercise? What do you think? Can you do long distance running? If you can, it is is it because you exercise regularly, because you always join marathon events or is it because you are just a long distance person? hahaha


After run running, we had volleyball and chess match which I did not participated participate in hehehe. We have had a closing ceremony, but I don't know what time the ceremony didn't know what time the ceremony was.

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Do you like running ?

On Friday, I stayed up to study accounting for 4 hours. I'm I was so sleepy and a bit tired because I had a meeting before that. I went back to my room at about 1:30 am and started studying study later at about 2:00 am. In During the meeting, we had to make props for a march event for today in conjunction with our college's sport day. Last night also we also have had to continue doing making our props and I came late, hehehe.

I had to study back revise my basic accounting because I really don't couldn't understand what the lecturer taught me in the class and I don't want it happened to happen again. I should study revise more and complete my assignments.

Today is the sport day! We started with a march event and every team did their best cheers. I really had fun and tried my best to cheer because I don't didn't want my team to look gloomy, hahaha. At least I need to show the I should at least show teamwork, hehehe. I think everyone will remember how much fun is their student life was. Next we had aerobics, It's really fun but I think the time allocated for it is was too short. I just feel was just starting to feel excited it's end already when it ended. After that, we had a running event. It's not far, a long distance run, maybe around 1 KM? Since Although I'm I rarely run or exercise, so I tried my best. It's quite tough for me because I feel tired quickly when running long distance if I did long distance running. I got number came in 43rd out of 100+ runners , it's not bad right? hahaha. I thought that I would come in over 100th place. will get number over 100.
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Do you like running?

On Friday, I stayed up late to study accounting for 4 hours. I'm so sleepy and a bit tired because I had a meeting before that. I went back to my room at about 1:30 am and studied later at about till 2:00 am. In the meeting, we had to make props for a march event for today in conjunction with the college's sports day. Last night also we also had have to continue doing/making our props and I came arrived  late. hehehe.

I had to revise study back my basic accounting because I really don't understand what the lecturer taught me in the class and I don't want it to happen happened again. I should study more and complete my assignments.

Today is the sports day! We started with a march event and every team did their best cheers. I really had fun and tried my best to cheer because I don't want my team to look gloomy. hahaha. At least I need to support my team.to show the teamwork, hehehe. I think everyone will remember how much fun is their student life was. Next we had aerobics, it's really fun but I think the time for it is too short. I just begin to feel excited and it's end over already. After that, we had the running event. It's not far, maybe around 1 Km. Since I'm I rarely run or exercise, so I tried my best. It was It's quite tough for me because I feel tired quickly if I do did long distance running. I got  came number 43rd out of 100++ , it's not bad right? hahaha. I thought that I would come in/finish at will get number over 100.

I remembered that when I was in secondary school, I couldn't can't run steadily for more than 400 meters. Even 200 meters was tiring, hahaha. I wonder how people can running steadily for a long time. I really want to try long distance running like a marathon once. But I think I need a lot of practise, especially how to control my breathing. I'm easily feel tired, it is because I'm rarely exercise. ? What do you think? Can you run do long distances running ? If you can, it is because you exercise regularly or you always join marathon events or you are a long distance person? hahaha

After running, we had volleyball and a chess match which I did not participated  in, hehehe. We have  had the closing ceremony, but I don't know what time it was. the ceremony.

* Thanks for reading, I hope you can help me to and make corrections. :)

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