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city and countryside (influence and measure)
In recent years, there is are an increasing number of people who finds that the city life is much better than rural life countryside. This essay will discuss the impact of this phenomenon and put forward some moderate proposals.
One of the most immediate effects is that the number of citizens will increase boost even though the city cannot could not accommodate provide so many people. Congested traffic crowded, air pollution and expensive flats are all wrecking havoc troubling the people in cities such as Beijing, Shanghai, and Guangdong in China. These problems could also lead to the conflict between new citizens and native citizens who could never stand the terrible environment and even blame these people occupying their hometown.
However, this* rural migration is far from being a problem of the city; it is also a problem in for the rural areas and in where more and more** houses have been abandoned idled and more and more** elders have to spend their old age without daughters and sons who have migrated to been in cities in search of just for a more comfortable and higher quality of life. More countrysides have become desolate since a no-people area with the people in there are crowding into cities area and the rural economy may never be further developed anymore.
*The use of "this" (and other nonspecific words such as "that" and "it") as a pronoun is very vague. All pronouns should have a clear antecedent.
https://webapps.towson.edu/ows/pronouns.htm
**Instead of writing "more and more" twice in one sentence, you can substitute the phrase with "increasing number of" or whatever other phrase you so choose.
The Possible solutions are also under discussion at both city and
countryside. To begin with, the infrastructure in rural areas should
be enhanced. For example, there needs to be more roads linking the cities and to countrysides; the more internet and phone stations must be built. and the phone station, and Hence more
people will be attracted to these locations. Moreover, there must be many highlights that are which still not being discovered
by the government in countryside. If one or two of these suggestions character of could
be implemented developed, the rural economy in there would
be stimulated activated and more well-paying jobs could be further brought in. Overall, improvements in great efforts
from both lifestyle and salary could make living in rural areas be highly desirable, thereby to reversing the trend.
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