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MY FAMILY (CORRECT PLEASE ) I'd like to tell a little about background of my family. I was born and raised by a small family of middle-level economy. I was the only child of my family. anyone always judge only child are spoiled child, because attention of parents would be directed to myself. Yes that's true, I also felt that I was a spoiled child in my family. I want my parents obey everything I asked. But with age, I feel an obligation to myself that I must demand earnestly to please both parents. My father's name is Guntur Warsito, he was born on August 17, 1952. He also was proud of his birth date which coincided with Indonesia's independence day . I am so proud with my father, at age who will reach the number 60, he kept the spirit of drudge only for my future. My mother's name is Susilawati, he was born on November 19, 1942. My mother was just a housewife, but the perfect housewife to me. she always faithful to ask for my situation. Plus now, i live in bandung for college. she was not tired to raised me because my mother hope that I can become a child who can succeed. Honestly, both my parents are my inspiration in running life. My parents is a drip that always encouraged me in the attempt. My desire is to want to make my parents proud of me, and I can make them life happily.

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MY FAMILY (CORRECT PLEASE )

I'd like to tell you a little about background of my family. I was born and raised by a small middle income family. I am the only child in my family. Most people judge only children as spoiled because all the attention from their parents is directed to them. Yes, that's true. I feel that I was a spoiled child in my family. I wanted my parents to obey everything I asked of them. With age though, I feel an obligation to myself, that I must demand earnestly to please both parents. My father's name is Guntur Warsito. He was born on August 17, 1952. He also is proud of his birth date which coincides with Indonesia's independence day . I am so proud of my father, who will soon be 60 years old. He has worked hard for my future. My mother's name is Susilawati. She was born on November 19th 1942. She may have just been a housewife but she was a perfect one to me. She always checks on me to see how I'm doing. Even now that I live in Bandung for college. She never tired out raising me because my mother always hoped that I could become a child who would succeed. Honestly, both my parents are my inspiration in running life. My parents is a drip are a force that always encourage me in my endeavors. My desire is to want to make my parents proud of me. If I do that, then I can make their lives happy.

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