The stranger. Part 47. "The battle in the spaceship". Please, correct my mistakes
...the ghouls slowly came to us. We waited for a good moment to start the fight. I lost my sabre some "swithes" ago, so I only had my fists.
"Lisa, stay here! Don't go a head! We can't allow them to tear our formation" I said.
"I know. We should attack them If they start to surround us "
It was clearly! The ghouls began going from two sides. We started the battle. The ghouls didn't expect that we would be so dirty... They tried to sting us. Fighting with a couple enemies I noticed that Lisa made other unbelievable motions. Those doublepunches were great. Suddenly the door to the next area was broken. The next moment more ghouls came into the room.
"Lisa, we have to get out through the punches! There are many enemies coming in!"
A few minutes later we had managed to leave the room...
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The stranger. Part 47. "The battle in the spaceship". Please, correct my mistakes
...the ghouls slowly came at us. We waited for a good moment to start the fight. I lost my sabre some "swithes" ago, so I only had my fists.
"Lisa, stay here! Don't go ahead! We can't allow them to tear break our formation" I said.
"I know. We should attack them If they start to surround us "
It was clearly! The ghouls began going coming from two sides. We started the battle. The ghouls didn't expect that we would be so dirty... They tried to sting us. Fighting with a couple of enemies I noticed that Lisa made other unbelievable motions. "Those double punches were great. Suddenly the door to the next area was broken through. The next moment more ghouls came into the room.
"Lisa, we have to get out through between the punches! There are many enemies coming in!"
A few minutes later we had managed to leave the room...
I am assuming that "swithes" is a unit of time that you created for this story. The word "ahead" should be one word. If you make it two words, it means a part of the body. We use the phrase, "break formation" instead of "tear formation." We always use "couple of." And the phrasing, "Lisa, we have to get out between the punches." means we need to leave between one punch and the next if that will help you to understand why "between" and not "through" would be used.
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The stranger. Part 47. "The battle in the spaceship". Please, correct my mistakes
...the ghouls slowly came to us. We waited for a good moment to start the fight. I had lost my sabre awhile ago, so I only had my fists."Lisa, stay here! Don't go a head! We can't allow them to tear our formation" I said.
"I know. We should attack them If they start to surround us."
The ghouls began to come from two sides. We started the battle. The ghouls had not expected us to be so dirty so they tried to sting us. Fighting with a couple of enemies I noticed that Lisa made other unbelievable motions. Those doublepunches were great. Suddenly the door to the next area was broken. The next moment more ghouls came into the room.
"Lisa, we have to get out through the punches! There are many enemies coming in!"
A few minutes later we had managed to leave the room...
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The stranger. Part 47. "The battle in the spaceship". Please, correct my mistakes
...The ghouls slowly came to us. We waited for a good moment to start the fight. I lost my sabre saber some "swithes?" ago, so I only had my fists."Lisa, stay here! Don't go ahead! We can't allow them to tear our formation" I said.
"I know, but we should attack them if they start to surround us "
It was clearly! The ghouls began going from two sides. We started the battle. The ghouls didn't expect that we would be so dirty... They tried to sting us. Fighting with a couple enemies I noticed that Lisa made other unbelievable motions. Those double punches were great. Suddenly the door to the next area was broken. The next moment more ghouls came into the room.
"Lisa, we have to get out through the punches? There are many lots of enemies coming in!"
A few minutes later we had managed to leave the room.
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I don't pride by the story :)
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