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ESSAY! I wrote this essay. Could anyone check it out and tell me if there are any mistakes? 1st PART I CANNOT PUT ALL THE ESSAY HERE BECAUSE IT WAS TOO LONG, THIS IS THE FIRST PART. THANK YOU VERY MUCH! Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: "We can learn more from people at a higher level than us (like teachers) than from people who are at the same level as us" Answer: Some people prefer to take classes and learn from people who are at the same level as them. I, on the other hand, strongly believe that learning from a teacher or a professional with a superior level than us yields better results and guarantees a more efficient learning process. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay. To begin with, professors and professionals are persons that have spent a significant amount of time preparing themselves and mastering their skills in a specific area or activity. Generally, they are accredited by Universities and Institutions with diplomas and certificates that materialize all the time and effort they have invested to acquire a competitive level of knowledge. Therefore, if we want to learn about something specific, we should consider first asking for the advice or opinion of someone who has spent more time studying the subject than us. For example, when I was taking the Introduction to Geomechanics course in my sophomore year, I organize a group study with some of my colleagues. Although many of them were very intelligent, dedicated and talented students, in some occasions none of us knew how to approach the activities in our Geomechanics book. It was always necessary to ask for the advice of our professor. He, as a Geomechanical engineer, used not only to guide us through the solution of the activities but also to give us papers and articles as supporting material. This example shows how important it is to have a more experienced person as a teacher.

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ESSAY! I wrote this essay. Could anyone check it out and tell me if there are any mistakes? 1st PART

I CANNOT PUT ALL THE ESSAY HERE BECAUSE IT WAS TOO LONG, THIS IS THE FIRST PART. THANK YOU VERY MUCH!
Question
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: "We can learn more from people at a higher level than us (like teachers) than from people who are at the same level as us"
Answer:
Some people prefer to take classes and learn from people who are at the same level as them. I, on the other hand, strongly believe that learning from a teacher or a professional with a superior level than us yields better results and guarantees a more efficient learning process. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.

To begin with, professors and professionals are persons people that have spent a significant amount of time preparing themselves and mastering their skills in a specific area or activity. Generally, they are accredited by universities and institutions with diplomas and certificates that materialize all the time and effort they have invested to acquire a competitive level of knowledge. Therefore, if we want to learn about something specific, we should consider first asking for the advice or opinion of someone who has spent more time studying the subject than us. For example, when I was taking the introduction to my geomechanics course in my sophomore year, I organized a group study with some of my colleagues. Although many of them were very intelligent, dedicated and talented students, on some occasions none of us knew how to approach the activities in our geomechanics textbook. It was always necessary to ask for the advice of our professor. He, as a geomechanical engineer, used not only to guide us through the solutions of to the activities but also to gave us papers and articles as supporting material. This example shows how important it is to have a more experienced person as a teacher.

Really good job! Just bear in mind that not ALL nouns have a capital letter - only proper nouns, and remember to always be consistent with tenses.

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ESSAY! I wrote this essay. Could anyone check it out and tell me if there are any mistakes? 1st PART

I CANNOT PUT ALL THE ESSAY HERE BECAUSE IT WAS TOO LONG, THIS IS THE FIRST PART. THANK YOU VERY MUCH!
Question
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: "We can learn more from people at a higher level than us (like teachers) than from people who are at the same level as us"
Answer:
Some people prefer to take classes and learn from people who are at the same level as them. I, on the other hand, strongly believe that learning from a teacher or a professional with at a superior level than us yields better results and guarantees a more efficient learning process. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.

To begin with, professors and professionals are persons that have spent a significant amount of time preparing themselves and mastering their skills in a specific area or activity. Generally, they are accredited by Universities and Institutions with diplomas and certificates that materialize recognize all the time and effort they have invested to acquire a competitive level of knowledge. Therefore, if we want to learn about something specific, we should consider first asking for the advice or opinion of someone who has spent more time studying the subject than us. For example, when I was taking the Introduction to Geomechanics course in my sophomore year, I organized a study group with some of my colleagues. Although many of them were very intelligent, dedicated and talented students, in on some occasions none of us knew how to approach the activities in our Geomechanics book. It was always necessary to ask for the advice of our professor. He, as a Geomechanical engineer, used would not only to guide us through to the solution of the activities but also to give us papers and articles as supporting material. This example shows how important it is to have a more experienced person as a teacher.

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