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A film review - Pride United Kingdom, 1984. Europe is struck by the economic crisis. Unemployment rises rapidly and the government has no money to do something. In that conditions Margaret Tether has decided to close tens of coal mines throughout the country. Miners announced a strike. In that time London group of LGBT activists decided to support the striking miners. They gathered a significant amount of money to transfer them to miners families. However, they did not expect that they would face with hostility and unwillingness to accept their help. It took time to these two, seemingly infinitely distant minorities, to grasp their proximity. The film director tells a story about real historical events, about real people. In my opinion, he wanted to convey the idea that it doesn't matter what your sexual orientation or religion preference is. There are things uniting all of us in the world. We call them happiness and the desire for well-being.

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A film review - Pride

United Kingdom, 1984. Europe is struck by the economic crisis. Unemployment rises(/Unemployment rates rise) rapidly and the government has no money to do something about it(/lacks the resources to do anything about it). In that  (+ the midst of)  those conditions, Margaret Tether has decided to close tens of coal mines throughout the country. Miners announced a strike.

In that time period, a London group of LGBT activists decided to support the striking miners. They gathered a significant amount of money to transfer them to the miners' families. However, they did not expect that they would face with (/would be faced with) hostility and unwillingness to accept(/resistance towards accepting) their help. It took time for these two, seemingly infinitely distant minorities, to grasp their proximity.

The film director tells a story about real historical events, about real people. In my opinion, he wanted to convey the idea that it doesn't matter what your sexual orientation or religion preference(/religion) is. There are things uniting all of us in the(/this) world. We call them *happiness and the desire for well-being. (you could also write -- "There are things uniting all of us in this world: happiness and the desire for well-being" or "There are things uniting all of us in this world, namely happiness and the desire for well-being" )


*"We call them" doesn't work that well in this context. I think the closest, good uses of "we call them" might be "Everyone feels a sense of unity with mankind and the universe - we call this god, we call this faith, we call this energy, whatever we call it, it is a transcendent aspect of mankind"

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