Sure‘s Notebook Entry #4：Climbing the mountains
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Today is Thursday, the 3th March. Our company would hold an activity about climbing on this Sunday which only allow women to join in , greeting the ”Women's Day“. I would like to take part in the outdoors activities, especially in climbing hills. I love the beauty of nature, with its wide blue sky, green trees and steady mountains. All about this could help my mine peace. Come on! My lovely day.
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Sure‘s Notebook Entry #4：Climbing the mountains
I would really appreciate if you could edit the entry in more of a “natural“ way.
Thank you for reading and your corrections.
Today is Thursday, the 3rd th March. Our company has organised would hold an activity about a climbing activity for on this Sunday for women only. which only allow women to join in , This is to celebrate greeting the ”Women's Day“. I would like to take part in the outdoors activities, especially in climbing hills. I love the beauty of nature, with its wide blue sky, green trees and steady mountains. All about This will could help my mine peace of mind. Come on! My lovely day.
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