This sounds like a piece of artistic writing. Well, I`m not a writer but I`m just gonna do my best here. BTW I love it when students include a pic too!:)

Can you see IT?

What A beautiful beach! Yes, we're talking about Copacabana, in Rio. Rio of THE Olympics, of pleasant people, and of eternal Sun. But, look! A man seated with his back to the sea. Does he not like the beach? Does he not like to see  HOW WONDERFUL IT IS what is wonderful? It's an absurd! Who does he think he is?

Calm down. He is just one of the most marvelous poetS from /IN Brazil. He's Drummond. He is shy and loves to write. He was expelled from school for mental insubordination , whatever that is. At one time, he translated the lyrics of a Beatles song musics of Beatles to Portuguese. (Still-I`m not sure why you are using `still` here) his face appeared on the A Brazilian currency note for some years. He loved spending TIME hazing (hazing has a very negative connotation) PRANKING PEOPLE on the phone, pretending to be someone else.

But he loved the beach and the sea. He is not with the HIS back to the sea, he is with the HIS face to the people. The same people which WHO read everything he wrote. Not once or twice, but many times. Sometimes it is not easy to see, but yes, there are people there. Everyone can see the beach and the sea, but only a few can actually see THE people. Drummond saw. DID