Today
I'm so tired.Because I had many meeting today.
In the afternoon,during the meeting,i feel asleep before I knew it.
It is too long meeting for me.I had just finished lunch.
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Today
I'm so tired because I had many meetings today. In the afternoon, during the meeting, I fell asleep before I knew it.The meeting was too long for me. I had just finished lunch.
Hello Miho,
I hope you didn't have a problem at work because you fell asleep in a meeting!
The correct verb collocation is 'fall asleep', a lot of people get this one mixed up. I reordered one sentence (green) to make it more natural. The only other problems are that you have a space after punctuation marks like full stops and commas and also to try to connect sentences and not make them a list of sentences.
Hope this helps
Bob
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Today
I'm so tired.Because I had many meetings today.In the afternoon,during the meeting ,I feel asleep before I knew it.
The meeting went on for too long.I had just finished lunch.
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