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Please correct these sentence as oral English, thank you! ^_^ Describe an interesting animal Well, an interesting animal I will talk about must be my pet. Its a bunny with black eyes, gray hair. I know it’s different from normal rabbits. That’s the reason why I keep it. The bunny’s name is Dami, if I translate it in English is Rice. In fact, this bunny was abandoned, Last year, in the Summer, I found it beside the road. But Dami is now in my family, and very healthy. Its character is very lively and clever, the bunny can jump out of the cage, eating apples, bite wooden furniture. Sometimes its behaves really annoying me, but it did not last, because bunny is too cute! Together for some times, I notice that Dami likes touching very much, especially its head. Every time I groom the hair, it looks very comfortable. But when bunny make a low sound, I know it is angry, may be I think it tells me to add its food! Rice's behavior and actions made me feel it like a naughty kid, it is very interesting. Although it is an animal, but it become a member of my family.

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Please correct these sentence as oral English, thank you! ^_^

Describe an interesting animal

Well, an interesting animal I will talk about must be my pet. It's a bunny with black eyes and gray hair. I know it’s different from normal rabbits. That’s the reason why I keep it. The bunny’s name is Dami, if I translate it into English it means Rice. In fact, this bunny was abandoned. Last year, in the summer, I found it beside the road. But Dami is now in part of my family, and it's very healthy. Its character is very lively and clever. The bunny can jump out of the cage, eating apples and bite wooden furniture. Sometimes its behaves behaviour really annoys me, but it doesn't last, because bunny is too cute! Together for sSometimes, I notice that Dami likes touching very much, especially its head. Every time I groom its hair, it looks very comfortable. But when bunny makes a low sound, I know it is angry, maybe I think it is telling me to add some food! Rice's behavior and actions make me feel like it is a naughty kid. It is very interesting. Although it is an animal, but it has become a member of my family.

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