Practica 7.
Currently, pollution and related-problems are enhancing and it's necessary to implement a measure to limit it. Increasing the price of petrol or new taxes are a good way to limit its use but I think that it's necessary to do it with other actions.
During a lot of time, petrol and its derivatives have been the main fuel for many factories and our transportation, as well. However, it intensive uses have increased the pollution and decreases the quality of life in many cities. Because of that, many governments have started to take some measures to limit the overuse of oil, high prices and taxes are some ways that countries as Mexico have taken.
Even so, actions mentioned before are affecting the overconsumption of oil, it's necessary to implement new technologies to replace our dependency to petrol. In this sense, some countries are developing new energy source based in air, water, and so on. Personally, I think that improving public transportation could inhibit the use of car and reduce the pollution.
In conclusion, limiting the use of petrol is the best way to reduce the pollution derived of its overuse. However, searching substitute energy sources is the challenge that governments need to do. Likewise, people need to be more conscious about the limited use of oil and its derivatives to help to decrease the pollution.
Saludos desde México.
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Practica 7.
Currently, pollution and related-problems are increasing enhancing and it's necessary to implement a measures to limit it. Increasing the price of petrol or imposing new taxes are a good ways to limit its use but I think that it's necessary to do it with other actions.For a long time During a lot of time, petrol and its derivatives have been the main fuel for many factories and our transportation, as well. However, it the intensive uses of petrol has have increased the pollution and decreased the quality of life in many cities. Because of that, many governments have started to take some measures to limit the overuse of oil, high prices and taxes are some ways that countries as Mexico have taken to discourage petrol use.
Even if so, the actions mentioned before are affecting the overconsumption of oil, it's necessary to implement new technologies to replace our dependency to petrol. In this sense, some countries are developing new energy source based in air, water, and so on. Personally, I think that improving public transportation could decrease inhibit the use of cars and reduce the pollution.
In conclusion, limiting the use of petrol is the best way to reduce the pollution derived of its overuse. However, searching for substitute energy sources is the challenge for that governments need to do. Likewise, people need to be more conscious about the limited use of oil and its derivatives to help to decrease the pollution.
Saludos desde México.
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Practica 7.
Currently, pollution and related problems are increasing and it's necessary to implement measures to limit it. Increasing the price of petrol or new taxes are a good way to limit its use but I think that it's necessary to do it with other actions.For a long time, petrol and its derivatives have been the main fuel for many factories and our transportation. However, Intensive use has increased the pollution and decreased the quality of life in many cities. Because of that, many governments have started to take measures to limit the overuse of oil. High prices and taxes are some measures that countries such as Mexico have taken.
Even so, actions mentioned before are affecting the overconsumption of oil, not needed? However, it's still necessary to implement new technologies to replace our dependency on petrol. In this sense, some countries are developing new energy sources based in the air, on water, and so on. Personally, I think that improving public transportation could reduce car use and thus reduce pollution.
In conclusion, limiting the use of petrol is the best way to reduce pollution. However, goverments need to accept the challenge of finding alternative energy sources. Likewise, people need to be encouraged to limit their use of oil and its derivatives in order to help to decrease the pollution.
Petrol and derivatives = plural so not it. The reader knows what you're talking about - intensive use...
Try to avoid words like however and but at the start of a sentence
Saludos desde México.
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Practica 7.
Currently, pollution and related-problems are increasing and it's necessary to implement a measure to limit it. Increasing the price of petrol or new taxes are a good way to limit its use but I think that it's necessary to do so by other means.For a long time, petrol and its derivatives have been the main fuel for many factories, and our transportation as well. However, its intensive uses have increased the pollution and decreased the quality of life in many cities. Because of that, many governments have started to take some measures to limit the overuse of oil; high prices and taxes are some of the ways that countries such as Mexico have taken.
Even so, actions mentioned before are affecting the over-consumption of oil. It's necessary to implement new technologies to replace our dependency on petrol. In this sense, some countries are developing new energy sources based on air, water, and so on. Personally, I think that improving public transportation could inhibit the use of cars and reduce the pollution.
In conclusion, limiting the use of petrol is the best way to reduce the pollution derived from its overuse. However, searching for substitute energy sources is the challenge that governments need to face. Likewise, people need to be more conscious about the limited use of oil and its derivatives to help to decrease the pollution.
Saludos desde México.
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