Practica 6.

Showing To show kids the difference between good and bad actions is, it's something that every parent needs to do be since (or, from the time that) their children are very young. Personally, I think that sometimes it needs to be accompanied by for a penalty to clarify the wrong action.

Society Societal functions  is based on rules that define bad and good actions, that actions allow us a better interactions. Clarifying the rules is it's something necessary that sometimes needs to be learned at home or school. In my country, it's very common for kids to learn basic rules at home which are later reinforced countersigned after at school in a topic called 'Civic education.'

Some parents think that to teach right from wrong for differentiating that actions, kids need to be punished when they do a wrong action. I believe that it's right but not with violence, children need to learn to avoid wrong actions but with educational punishments or specific restrictions. Don´t play videogames, don't go out with friends or do charity clarity actions, I'm talking about that kind kids of penalties.

In summary, clarifying good actions from bad ones it's something necessary in our society. Parents need to be the first people who teach it to their children and something using punishments without using violence.

Saludos desde México.

Practice #6 or Example 6 or Exercise #6

To show kids the difference between good and bad behaviour is something that every parent needs to do, starting from when their children are very young. Personally, I think that sometimes it needs to be accompanied by some form of discipline to specifically straighten out a wrong action.

Society functions based on rules that define bad and good actions, the good actions allowing us a better interaction with each other. Clarifying what those rules are is a necessary step that sometimes need to be learned at home or school. In my country, it's very common for kids to learn basic rules at home and then to have those rules reinforced at school by way of a subject called 'Civic Education.'

Some parents think that in order to teach their children to differentiate between good and bad actions, kids need to be punished when they do something wrong. I agree that it's right to punish children, but not with violence. Rather, children need to learn to avoid wrong actions through the use of discipline that educates or with specific restrictions. I'm referring to the kind of clear penalties that restrict specific actions, for example:  "Because you did ... you're not allowed to video games", or "Because of this, you're not allowed to go out with your friends".

In conclusion, teaching our children to differentiate between good and bad actions is something necessary in our society. Parents need to be the first to teach their children, perhaps with the use of discipline, but definitely without the use of violence. 

Saludos desde México.

Hi José,

Your writing is very interesting and well-written. Because italki user 'James' has already provided you with a good technical correction of your text, I thought you may find it helpful to read a version with some stylistic changes suggested, which use natural English expressions.

All the best,

Harriet

Practica 6.

To show/teach kids the difference between good and bad actions--- it's something that every parent needs to do from the time their children are very young. Personally, I think that sometimes it needs to be accompanied by a penalty to insure the child knows/learns the behavior is wrong.

Society functions based on rules that define bad and good actions, such rules promote social harmony. Clarifying the rules is something necessary that sometimes need to be done at home or school. In my country, it's very common for kids to learn basic rules at home and countersigned afterwards at school in a topic called 'Civic education.'

Some parents think that for differentiating that actions, kids need to be punished when they behave poorly. I believe that it's right but it should be done without violence, children need to learn to avoid wrong actions but with educational punishments or specific restrictions. Don´t play videogames, don't go out with friends or do clarity actions???, I'm talking about that kind of penalty.

In summary, learning and distinguishing good actions from bad ones is something necessary in our society. Parents need to be the first people who teach it to their children, sometimes using punishments without using violence.

Saludos desde México.