The best day of my life
The best day of my life was when I was 15 years old, in my birthday, that day was very special for my because in my country when the girls turn 15 years old, the girls become in misses, and normally have a big party. But in my case, I was all the day at the shopping centre buying clothes, after that I ate my favourite food at my fovourite restaurant, I continued walking with my friends taking me a lot of photos and doing things crazy. Finally at the night I went to the cinema to see a film that I was expecting long time ago, I enjoyed so much!! That day was totally funny and nice, I'll always remember it.
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The best day of my life
The best day of my life was when I was 15 years old, on my birthday. That day was very special for me because in my country when girls turn 15 years old, the girls become a woman, and normally has a big party. But in my case, all day i was at the shopping centre buying clothes. After that I ate my favourite food at my favourite restaurant, and I continued walking with my friends, taking a lot of photos and doing crazy things. Finally in the evening, I went to the cinema to see a film that I was have wanted to see for a long time and I enjoyed it so much!! That day was totally (uncommon word in english for this phrasing but not incorrect, maybe use incredibly or super instead?) funny and nice (you could use a more positive word than nice as in english nice is like kinda good but not anything special. Maybe you could say great or amazing), I'll always remember it.0
The best day of my life was when I was 15 years old. It was my birthday. That day was very special to me because in my country when a girls turns 15 years old, they become a woman and normally have a big party. But in my case, I was all the day at the shopping centre all day buying clothes and after that I ate my favourite food at my favourite restaurant. Then, I continued walking with my friends who were taking me a lot of photos and doing crazy things crazy. Finally, that evening I went to the cinema to see a film that I had wanted to see for a long time. I enjoyed so much! That day was totally funny and nice. I'll always remember it.
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