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Daily notebook entry As always, I am not going to think about whether what I say is actually grammatically correct, as I want to find out my real English level. So, today, I am going to speak about what I am currently seeing outside. Very simple, random, but that's good enough I'd say. I am from Lithuania, and it's winter right now. It's quite cold, around 0 degrees C, and there is a lot of snow outside. There is a tall tree, just outside my window, and it's half green, half white. I think it's an evergreen, but I am not sure if that's how this tree is called in English. I can see a bird, walking on the tree, a little bit more far away from me, and he seems to be hiding behind the branches, as I barely see him. I wonder, what is he doing? Is he looking for food, or just hanging out? Finally, I should have said that it's actually snowing right now - it's beautiful. What do you think? Thank you. By the way, if someone here really enjoys correcting other people's notebook entries, perhaps someone would like to help me with me my English daily? Possibly not on italki? Have a nice day :p

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Daily notebook entry

As always, I am not going to think about whether what I say is actually grammatically correct, as I want to find out my real English level.

So, today, I am going to speak (write) about what I am currently seeing outside. Very simple and random, but that's good enough I'd say.

I am from Lithuania, and it's winter right now. It's quite cold, around 0 degrees C, and there is a lot of snow outside. There is a tall tree just outside my window, and it's half green, half white. (like the tree itself or the snow is covering half of it?)  I think it's an evergreen, but I am not sure if that's how this tree is called in English. (evergreen is a description of the trees seasons. If the leaves fall off the tree it is deciduous if the leaves stay on it all year it is an evergreen)

I can see a bird, walking on the tree a little bit more far further away from me, and he seems to be hiding behind the branches, as I can barely see him. I wonder, what he is doing? Is he looking for food, or just hanging out? Finally, I should have said that it's actually snowing right now - it's beautiful.


All makes total sense. Some cool observations. Try asking more questions about the bird and the tree. 


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Ah, thank you for the opinion, @Maria.
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This is fantastic, you sound completely fluent.

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