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Sure‘s Notebook 1
Hello everyone.This is the first time I've wrote a notebook here. = This is my first time writing a notebook on here.
I am really looking forward to improve my English, and now I'm doing it just do it. = I'm looking forward to improving my English, and I'm starting now.
Thank you for your reading and your corrections. = Thank you for reading and correcting this.
Sure‘s Notebook 1
I have studied English for a long time when I was a child. = I've been studying English since I was a child.
But I just could only read and understand some English. = But then I could only read and understand some English.
I am poor at writing and speaking, and I want to change it. = I'm not that good at writing or speaking, and I wanna [want to] do better.
Last year I graduated from college and now I'm a new employee at a Japanese company.
I don't have not enough time to learn English compared to the time when I was a student. = I don't have a lot of time to study English compared to when I was a student.
I will try my best to do it. = I'll try my best.
I added some conjugations (i.e. I will => I'll) and some slang like 'want to' to 'wanna'.
The yellow means to take out. Red for corrections. And purple is more of a "natural" way to say it.
If you have any questions feel free to ask!
Sure‘s notebook 1
Hellow everyone. This is the first time I have written a notebook here. I am really looking forward to improving my English, and now I am doing just do it. Thank you for your reading and your correction.
Sure‘s notebook 1
I have studied English for a long time when I was a child, but I could only just could read and understand some English. I was poor at writing and speaking, and I want to change that it. Last year I graduated from college and now I'm a new employee comer at a Japanese company. I don't have not enough time to learn English compared to when compareing the time when I was a student. I will try my best to do it.
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