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sure‘s notebook 1 Hellow everyone.This is the first time I write a notebook here.I am really looking forward to improve my English, and now I just do it. Thank you for your reading and correction. sure‘s notebook 1 I have studied English for a long time when I was a child. But I just could read and understand some English. I poor at writing and speaking, and I want to chang it. Last year I graduated from college and Now I'm a new comer at a Japanese company. I have not enough time to learn English compareing the time when I was a student. I will try my best to do it.

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Sure‘s Notebook 1

Hello everyone.

This is the first time I've wrote a notebook here. = This is my first time writing a notebook on here.

I am really looking forward to improve my English, and now I'm doing it just do it. = I'm looking forward to improving my English, and I'm starting now.

Thank you for your reading and your corrections. = Thank you for reading and correcting this.

Sure‘s Notebook 1
I have studied English for a long time when I was a child. = I've been studying English since I was a child.

But I just could only read and understand some English. = But then I could only read and understand some English.

I am poor at writing and speaking, and I want to change it. = I'm not that good at writing or speaking, and I wanna [want to] do better.

Last year I graduated from college and now I'm a new employee at a Japanese company.

I don't have not enough time to learn English compared to the time when I was a student. = I don't have a lot of time to study English compared to when I was a student.

I will try my best to do it. = I'll try my best.


I added some conjugations (i.e. I will => I'll) and some slang like 'want to' to 'wanna'. 

The yellow means to take out. Red for corrections. And purple is more of a "natural" way to say it.

If you have any questions feel free to ask!

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Sure‘s notebook 1

Hellow everyone. This is the first time I have written a notebook here. I am really looking forward to improving my English, and now I am doing just do it. Thank you for your reading and your correction.

Sure‘s notebook 1
I have studied English for a long time when I was a child, but I  could only just could read and understand some English. I  was poor at writing and speaking, and I want to change that it. Last year I graduated from college and now I'm a new employee comer at a Japanese company. I don't have not enough time to learn English compared to when compareing the time when I was a student. I will try my best to do it.

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