Our grandmas said that...
Our grandmas said that in their old times they could't work like a man and they had to do the housework and obey what their fathers said and they couldn't go to parties or couldn't have boyfriends because their fathers were very strict.
Nowadays the woman can work in a wide labor field and it's not necessary to get married and stay home taking care of the children, and all the family helps in the housework , everything is more equal for everyone.
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Our grandmas said that...
Our grandmas said in their days they could't work like a man.They had to do the housework, obey what their fathers said, and they couldn't go to parties or have boyfriends because their fathers were very strict.
Nowadays woman can work in a wide labor field and it's not necessary to get married and stay home taking care of the children. The whole family helps in the housework and everything is more equal for everyone.
The sentence structure was changed to break up the run-on sentences. Also, in sentences where things are being listed, it is generally better to replace "and" with commas.
Good writing...and our grandmas had it rough!
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I also missed couldn't in the beginning. Contract could and not by joining the words and replacing the o with the '.
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