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COMPLAINT E-MAIL COMPLAINT E-MAIL Dear Mr. Pitiful, I am writing to you this letter to express my strong dissatisfaction with the items that I received yesterday afternoon for the following reasons: Firstly, I would like to say that the items weren’t given on time, because it is supposed that they had to be delivered in more than a week ago. Secondly, the items didn’t match exactly with the ones I ordered, and one of them is defective. The bottle of perfume is empty and furthermore one of the books is written in a different language that I ordered. Finally, I would like to be taken in consideration for the inconveniences and be compensated in some way; otherwise, I shall be forced to take further action. I am looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible. Sincerely, J.D.

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Dear Mr. Pitiful,

I am writing this letter to express my strong dissatisfaction with the items that I received yesterday afternoon.

Firstly, I would like to say that the items weren’t received on time and were supposed to have been delivered a week ago.

Secondly, the items didn’t match exactly with the ones I had ordered, and one of them is defective. The bottle of perfume is empty and furthermore one of the books is written in a different language than the one I ordered.

Finally, I would like some consideration to be taken for these inconveniences and be compensated in some way; otherwise, I shall be forced to take further action.
I am looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.
Sincerely,
J.D.

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COMPLAINT E-MAIL

COMPLAINT E-MAIL
Dear Mr. Pitiful,
I am writing to you this letter to express my strong dissatisfaction with the items that I received yesterday afternoon for the following reasons: (not wrong, just not neccessary, rather something related to "Mr. Pitiful" is more relevant, such as. the items from your company/shop/...) 
Firstly, I would like to say that the items weren’t given on time, because it is  was supposed that they had to be delivered in more than a week ago. (same here, not wrong, just not neccessary and in an email you do not "say")
Secondly, the items didn’t match exactly with the ones I ordered, and one of them is was defective. The bottle of perfume is empty (correct if you ordered different items and only one of them is bottle of perfume, otherwise, "a" instead of "the") and furthermore one of the books is written in a different language that than which I ordered.
Finally, I would like to be taken in consideration for the inconveniences and request to be compensated in some way; otherwise, I shall be forced to take further action.
I am looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.
Sincerely,
J.D.
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COMPLAINT E-MAIL

COMPLAINT E-MAIL
Dear Mr. Pitiful,
I am writing  this letter to you to express my strong dissatisfaction with the items that I received yesterday afternoon for the following reasons:
Firstly, I would like to say that the items weren’t sent on time, because it is supposed that they should have been had to be delivered in more than a week ago.
Secondly, the items didn’t match exactly with the ones I ordered, and one of them is defective. The bottle of perfume is empty and furthermore one of the books is written in a different language than I ordered.
Finally, I would like to be taken in consideration a solution to be proposed for these problems and be compensated in some way; otherwise, I shall be forced to take further action.
I am looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.
Sincerely,
J.D.

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