Family

When I was a kid we went on Hholidays every summer to a nice place. I always enjoyed it although the journey was usually very long every time. I think these family holidays are so important because you can fill yourself up with memories about your happy days with your loved ones. You can get to know your parents and your sisters/brothers more. If you want a happy life you need to take care of your own family as well. These holidays will be valuable moments in your future. It doesn't need to be an expensive trip. The main thing is to be spend time together. Sometimes we just made had a (grill party - probably best to use Barbeque BBQ when referring to this) barbeque in our garden or played badminton. When I remember these moments I smile and I wish I can could go back in to this time. I feel the happiness that I felt when I was on these holiday or at family events. I also loved Christmas and Easter. These were just so perfect. I'll try to do my best to create a similar athmosphere in my own family.

I hope my corrections help. It is a very nice and well written text.

Regards,

Aidan