write about a day in my life .Beginner
A day in my life is very funny:
I usually get up about at 7 o´clok, then I always have a shower and I have breakfast at home.
I start work at nine o'clok. I'm a teacher in a Nursery School. My job is really good. I have fifteen childrens in the classroom,They are 2 years old.
Every day I tell them stories, we play, we sing..They are usally very goog.
At five o clock , I finish my work.
In my free time I learn English but I sometines I meet with my friends
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also, 'about at 7 o'clock' opposes itself because the first part (about) is saying you woke up around 7 whereas the other (at) says you woke up exactly at 7, therefore i would suggest saying 'I usually get up around 7 o'clock' or 'I usually get up at about 7 o'clock'
children is plural, so you don't need the 's' after it.
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spelling:
1) instead of " 7 o´clok " and "five o clock"- o 'clock
2) Instead "They are usally very goog." - They are usually very good
3) Instead "but I sometines I meet" - but sometimes I meet
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