today was a fantastic day
i wake up at 5 am , I prayed , I did sports and I ate break fast
the breakfast was an eggs and tomato and bread and some other things that I don’t know how to say it in English
I deposited my father and my mother and then go back home
and I started to learn English with writing this note book
I hope to learn English quickly
thank you
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today was a fantastic day
i wake woke up at 5 am , I prayed , I did sports and I ate breakfastthe breakfast was an eggs and tomatoes and bread and some other things that I don’t know how to say it in English
I deposited* my father and my mother at work and then go went back home
and I started to learn English with by writing this note book
I hope to learn English quickly
thank you
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* "Deposited" sounds very formal. A more common way to say this is "I dropped off my father and mother at work"
Welcome and well written! I made a few small suggestions. Happy learning,
- Hannah
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Today was a fantastic day
I woke up at 5 am, I prayed, I did some exercises sports and I ate breakfast of
the breakfast was an eggs and tomato and bread and some other things that I don’t know how to say it in English
I deposited dropped off my father and my mother and then go came/went back home
and I started to learn English with by writing this note book.
I hope to learn English quickly
Thank you
1
Today was a fantastic day
I wake woke up at 5 am, prayed, did sports and ate breakfastThe breakfast was an with eggs, and tomato and bread and some other things that I don’t know how to say it in English
I deposited left my father and my mother, and then go went back home
and I started to learn English with by writing this note book
I hope to learn English quickly
thank you
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