I would like someone to help me to correct this writing. I would like to take the FCE exam.

LETTER OF APPLICATION:

Dear Mrs Benson;

I am writing to you in order to apply for the job of a summer staff member on in the bookshop which was advertised in a newspaper.

I think that I am the person that you are looking for. Firstly, I love to spend my free time reading books. I have a lot of books in my house and also I like to organize it such as like a library.

Besides (or Also), I speak English fluently and also French, as well as Spanish. In addition the last summer I was working in an English hotel.

Therefore, I have experience in the library of my university because I am a volunteer of it (or I volunteer in it - you can use "volunteer as a noun or a verb) . I help the staff to organize all the books and help the students with your their searches.

I expect hope that you will consider my application. Thank you for your attention

Yours sincerely

Good job Andres! My corrections are in red and my suggestions to sound more natural are in blue/grey.