IELTS Writtig Task №2 Essay №6
Some people believe that genetically modified foods are good for society because they help to feed the world’s growing population. Other argues that genetically altered foods are bad for nutrition and the environment.
Discuss both views and give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Genetic engineering is one of the most interesting and arguable part of science. Knowledge about genes is very important for different sides of human life, for example, food production. Genetic engineering provides necessity knowledge for suppliers to produce modified food. Modified foods are getting more and more popular among food companies in order to satisfy growing demand from human population. Bur there are people who insist that modified foods are bad for nutrition and wrong way to develop society. Although genetically modified foods allow creating big volume of cheap food to feed increasing human population, I strongly believe that modified foods are able to damage human wealth by breaking inside human bodily metabolism.
Nowadays humanity claims more food than 100 years ago, because it is growing permanently. So to produce more food people can use genetically modified plants and animals with necessary features. It is faster than selection and cheaper than using of usual way therefore it is profitable for companies to produce big volume food with less expense for fertilizing and protecting. For example, there was a field near my home where one food company grew potatoes with modification; insects couldn’t eat those potatoes. That company had more crops than my family with using natural potatoes from the same land size. In case of economy modified food is profitable for society, but there is another side.
Each individual of society has a right to eat natural wealthy food. Recent day people don’t know exactly how modified food influences for human wealth and genes. I read a medical articles in one famous magazine it was written about an experiment: rats were fed by modified food long time, they life was more less than usual rats and they had more illnesses. There is not a guarantee that humans can eat modified food without any consequences for their wealth.
In fact people need more food and modified food provides more volume. However it is possible bad influence to human wealth and genetic information. People should pay attention their population wealth instead of economical profitability.
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Nowadays humanity claims more food than 100 years ago, because it is growing continually permanently. So to produce more food people can use genetically modified plants and animals with necessary features. It is faster than selection and cheaper than using of the usual way therefore it is profitable for companies to produce large volumes of big volume food with less expense for fertilizing and protecting. For example, there was a field near my home where one food company grew potatoes with modification; insects couldn’t eat those potatoes. That company had more crops than my family with while using natural potatoes from the same land size. In that case of economy modified food is profitable for society, but there is another side.Each individual of in society has a right to eat natural whealthy food. Recent Modern day people don’t know exactly how modified food influences for human whealth and genes. I read a medical articles in one famous magazine, it that was written about an experiment: rats were been fed by modified foods for a long time, theiry life span was more less than normal usual rats and they had more illnesses. There is not a guarantee that humans can eat modified food without any consequences for their whealth.
In fact people need more food and modified food provides more volume. However it is possible it may have a bad negative influence effect to human whealth and genetic information. People should pay attention to their populations whealth instead of economical profitability.
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IELTS Writtig Task №2 Essay №6
Some people believe that genetically modified foods are good for society because they help to feed the world’s growing population. Other argues that genetically altered foods are bad for nutrition and the environment.Discuss both views and give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Genetic engineering is one of the most interesting and arguable controversial parts of science. Knowledge about genes is very important for different sides of human life, for example, food production. Genetic engineering provides the necessary ity knowledge for suppliers to produce modified foods. Modified foods are getting more and more popular among food companies in order to satisfy growing demand from the human population. But there are people who insist that modified foods are bad for nutrition and a wrong way to develop society. Although genetically modified foods allow us to createing a large big volume of cheap food to feed the increasing human population, I strongly believe that modified foods have the ability are able to damage human wealth by breaking inside down human bodily metabolism.
Nowadays humanity claims more food than 100 years ago, because it is growing permanently. So to produce more food people can use genetically modified plants and animals with necessary features. It is faster than selection and cheaper than using of usual way therefore it is profitable for companies to produce big volume food with less expense for fertilizing and protecting. For example, there was a field near my home where one food company grew potatoes with modification; insects couldn’t eat those potatoes. That company had more crops than my family with using natural potatoes from the same land size. In case of economy modified food is profitable for society, but there is another side.
Each individual of society has a right to eat natural wealthy food. Recent day people don’t know exactly how modified food influences for human wealth and genes. I read a medical articles in one famous magazine it was written about an experiment: rats were fed by modified food long time, they life was more less than usual rats and they had more illnesses. There is not a guarantee that humans can eat modified food without any consequences for their wealth.
In fact people need more food and modified food provides more volume. However it is possible bad influence to human wealth and genetic information. People should pay attention their population wealth instead of economical profitability.
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Oh, thanks :)
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Good attempt Lana!
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