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Someone Help Me? I wrote right? I started my studies in dance in 2003 in Studium Carla Petroni in my hometown, where I remained until 2014. Learning Classic Ballet, Pointes, Jazz Dance , Contemporary Dance, Street Dance and Tap Dance. In 2015, I joined the ONG FINAC group, which aims to include the dancer in the art world, in providing regular classes with excellent professors and courses with several Brazilian dance professionals. With the group I was in several dance festivals, including the world's largest, the Joinville Dance Festival (Brazil). Still in 2015 beginning, I was approved by SINDDANÇA (Trade Union of Dance Professionals of São Paulo) and started my theater studies at the ALMA Group, still in my hometown. In Sep/2015 I moved to São Paulo city to work for company Black & Red - Artistic Productions of Children's Musical Theater with the “Natal Mágico” (Magic Christmas) show during four months.

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Someone Help Me? I wrote right?

I started my studies in dance in 2003 in Studium Carla Petroni in my hometown, where I remained until 2014. Learning Classic Ballet, Pointes, Jazz Dance , Contemporary Dance, Street Dance and Tap Dance. In 2015, I joined the ONG FINAC group, which aims to include the dancer dancers in the art world, in by providing regular classes with excellent professors and courses with several Brazilian dance professionals. With the group I was in several dance festivals, including the world's largest, the Joinville Dance Festival (Brazil).
Still in 2015 beginning In the beginning of 2015, I was approved by SINDDANÇA (Trade Union of Dance Professionals of São Paulo) and started my theater studies at the ALMA Group, still in my hometown.
In Sep/2015 I moved to São Paulo city to work for a company called Black & Red - Artistic Productions of Children's Musical Theater with the “Natal Mágico” (Magic Christmas) show during for four months.


Good writing. It's very difficult to speak about things that happened at different times in the past, so you did well : )

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Someone Help Me? Did I write right?*

I started my studies in dance in 2003 at the Studium Carla Petroni in my hometown, where I remained until 2014, learning Classic Ballet, Pointes, Jazz Dance , Contemporary Dance, Street Dance and Tap Dance. In 2015, I joined the ONG FINAC group, which aims to include the dancer in the art world, in providing regular classes with excellent professors and courses with several Brazilian dance professionals. With the group I was in several dance festivals, including the world's largest, the Joinville Dance Festival (Brazil).
At the beginning of 2015 I was approved by SINDDANÇA (Trade Union of Dance Professionals of São Paulo) and started my theater studies at the ALMA Group, still in my hometown.
In Sep/2015 I moved to São Paulo city to work for the Black & Red - Artistic Productions of Children's Musical Theater Company with the “Natal Mágico” (Magic Christmas) show during four months.


*yes, you mostly wrote right.

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Someone Help Me? I wrote right?

I started my studies in dance in 2003 in{ } the Studium Carla Petroni in my hometown, where I remained until 2014. Learning Classic Ballet, Pointes, Jazz Dance , Contemporary Dance, Street Dance and Tap Dance. In 2015, I joined the ONG FINAC group, which aims to include the dancer in the art world, in   by providing regular classes with excellent professors and courses with several Brazilian dance professionals. With the group, I was in several dance festivals, including the world's largest, the Joinville Dance Festival (Brazil).
Still in 2015 beginning, [in the beginning of 2015] I was approved by SINDDANÇA (Trade Union of Dance Professionals of São Paulo) and started my theater studies at the ALMA Group, still in my hometown.
In Sep/2015 I moved to São Paulo city to work for company Black & Red - Artistic Productions of Children's Musical Theater with the “Natal Mágico” (Magic Christmas) show during four months.

red are the mistake

perfect writing..........

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