Recent politic changes in Spain
Since 2008 in Europe and particularly in Spain there is an important economic crisis. In the past Spanish people lived beyond its means and Spain invested in building business, but nowadays, that sector isn´t work, we have many empty houses and neither buyer. Crisis affects works too, actually in Spain there aren´t works and many people need go to other countries to look for a job. Here students are well qualified but they can´t find a good job. There are many half-day jobs with a bad salary. This is why young people decide look for good luck in other countries. In Spain we have good education, good universities, and our students are well valued.
Secondly this situation affects to politic too. People require efficiency and hard work to politicians, but recently, there have been many cases of politic corruption in different political parties. Society feels that politicians trick and steal to citizens. As such, new politic parties have appeared with a high success. People felt the necessity of change and they started to work to get it.
Normally in Spain there were 2 principal political parties, but in last national elections, 4 political parties had most of Spanish votes. So actually in Spain there are 4 principal political parties, 1 right-wing party, 2 left-wing party and 1 center party. In that elections, any party had the majority of votes, so actually, we don’t have president. Political parties are talking and negotiating to obtain the majority and can govern. The principal problem is that there are big differences between parties. The most probably situation is that different parties won´t reach an agreement and we will have new elections on June.
Besides actual situation do that young people are more interested in politics. Young people are tired to old political parties and they want participate in the actual change. For example, I´m 23 years old and I belong to a political party since one year ago. I think that is necessary change the traditional politics, because we need to progress.
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Recent politic changes in Spain
Since 2008 in Europe and particularly in Spain there is an important economic crisis. In the past Spanish people lived beyond its means and Spain invested in building business, but nowadays, that sector doesn´t work, we have many empty houses and neither buyer. Crisis affects works too, actually in Spain there aren´t works and many people need go to other countries to look for a job. Here students are well qualified but they can´t find a good job. There are many half-day jobs with a bad salary. This is why young people decide to look for good luck in other countries. In Spain we have good education, good universities, and our students are well valued.Secondly this situation affects to politic too. People require efficiency and hard work to politicians, but recently, there have been many cases of politic corruption in different political parties. Society feels that politicians trick and steal to citizens. As such, new politic parties have appeared with a high success. People felt the necessity of change and they started to work to get it.
Normally in Spain there were 2 principal political parties, but in last national elections, 4 political parties had most of Spanish votes. So actually in Spain there are 4 principal political parties, 1 right-wing party, 2 left-wing parties and 1 center party. In that elections, any party had the majority of votes, so actually, we don’t have a president. Political parties are talking and negotiating to obtain the majority and can govern. The principal problem is that there are big differences between parties. The most probable situation is that different parties won´t reach an agreement and we will have new elections on June.
Besides actual situation do that young people are more interested in politics. Young people are tired of old political parties and they want participate in the actual change. For example, I´m 23 years old and I belong to a political party since last year . I think that change in the traditional politics is necessary , because we need progress.
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Normally in Spain there were are 2 principal political parties, but in the last national elections, 4 political parties had most of the Spanish votes. So actually now in Spain there are 4 principal political parties, 1 right-wing party, 2 left-wing parties and 1 center party. In that those elections, any no party had the majority of votes, so actually, currently we don’t have a president. Political parties are talking and negotiating to obtain the majority and so that they can govern. The principal problem is that there are big differences between parties. The most probable situation is that the different parties won´t reach an agreement and we will have new elections in June.
Besides actual Because of the situation do that young people are more interested in politics. Young people are tired to of old political parties and they want to participate in the actual real change. For example, I´m 23 years old and I have belonged to a political party since for one year ago. I think that it is necessary to change the traditional politics, because we need to progress.
Besides actual Because of the situation do that young people are more interested in politics. Young people are tired to of old political parties and they want to participate in the actual real change. For example, I´m 23 years old and I have belonged to a political party since for one year ago. I think that it is necessary to change the traditional politics, because we need to progress.
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Recent political changes in Spain
Since 2008 in Europe and in particularly in Spain there is has been an important economic crisis. In the past Spanish people lived beyond its their means and Spain invested in building businesses. , but nowadays, Now, however, that sector isn't work,doing well and we have many empty houses and neither no buyers. The crisis affects works too,jobs as well actually In Spain there aren't works enough jobs and many people need go to other countries to look for work a job. Here students are well qualified but they can´t find a good job. There are many half-day jobs with a bad salary. ThisThat is why young people decide to look for good luck in other countries. In Spain we have good education, good universities, and our students are well valued respected.Secondly this situation affects to politics too. People require efficiency and hard work to from politicians, but recently, there have been many cases of politic corruption in different political parties. Society feels that politicians trick and steal to from the citizens. As such, new political parties have appeared with a high success. People felt the necessity of need for change and they started to work to get it.
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