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My hobby I think that every person has hobbies. I too have a hobby. One of them - the photo. Especially I love macroshooting. But I now I am engaged in it very little, because at me a little free time. Other hobby - foreign languages. I learn Spanish because I adore Spain. Still I like to travel. If asked me: "Where you would like to go to vacation?", I without deliberating I answered - to Spain. I very much like Salvador Dalí's creativity, architecture of Spain, the sea and good ecology. But I hate a heat which happens there in the summer. XD I like tourism and hotel business. It's my cup of tea. Probably nobody would refuse excellent travel. :) Also I love dances, music and reading. When I studied at school I went in for professional choreography. And I listen to music very often. I think everybody like to listen to music :D I hope you too have a hobby which gives you pleasure. Thanks for attention!

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My hobby

I think that every person has hobbies. I too have a hobby. One of them is photography. Especially I love macro-photography. But now I am engaged in it very little, because I have very little free time.
My other hobby is  foreign languages. I am  learning Spanish because I adore Spain. Still I like to travel. If you asked me: "Where you would like to go on vacation?" I, without deliberating, would answer "Spain". I really like Salvador Dalí's creativity, the architecture of Spain, the sea and good ecology. But I hate the heat which happens there in the summer. XD I like tourism and the hotel business. It's my cup of tea. Probably nobody would refuse excellent trips :)
Also I love dancing, music and reading. When I studied at school, I went in for professional choreography. And I listen to music very often. I think everybody likes to listen to music :D
I hope you too have a hobby which gives you pleasure. Thanks for your attention!


Hello Zlata,

I can understand all of your text but there are some corrections. We would say 'I am learning Spanish.' because this is very often a temporary situation - albeit over a long period of time sometimes. I 'very (much)' like is quite a common error, the best way around this without rearranging the whole sentence is to use 'really' instead of 'very'. then it is fine.


Hope this helps


Bob

PS Nice photo of the Sagrada Familia, did you take it?

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Hello. How are you ? I teach English in a college, and you ? I could help you to improve your spoken English. It is free of charge. I just want to meet new friends and know their cultures, such as : interesting places, education, food etc. Please add me & talk on Skype directly = aliagil1
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Yeah, Vietnam too is interesting ! ^^
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How about Viet Nam ? do you know Viet Nam ? do you want to learn vietnamese I have some hoibies are reading , watch movies of hollywood , cooking , walking .
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correct errors please

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