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my first lesson ... i would like to improve my english and i question me to know how to do it ! my english is a school english. In April i go to Malt with my family to learn english. I hope it will be an good experience !! we like travels and we went in maroc two times with our tree children. we have use to travel with a 4*4 and on the top of our 4*4 we have installed two houses. on is for children and the other for me and my husband. also we can stop when we want and when we find a lovely place for the night: near river, in the mountain or in (forêt ..). we love travel as it. i think my english is very bad and also I think i miss lot of vocabulary and i completely lost with the use of the different time: past, preterit, .... thank for your help

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my first lesson ...

i would like to improve my English and i question me to know i'm wondering how to do it!
my English is a school english the English I learned in school.
In April i go to Malt Malta with my family to learn English. I hope it will be an good experience !!
we like travels to travel and we went in maroc to Morocco two times with our tree three children. we have use to used to travel with a 4*4 and on the top of our 4*4 we have installed two houses tents. on One is for the children and the other for me and my husband. also we can stop when we want and when we find a lovely place for the night: near a river, in the mountains or in (forêt ..) the forest. we love travel as it. ? We love travelling like this?
i think my English is very bad and also I think i miss lot of vocabulary and i am completely lost with the use of the different time tenses: past, preterit present?, ....
thanks for your help


Note:

In English, the names of languages are always capitalized: English, French, Chinese...

Always 'an' before a vowel, otherwise 'a': 'a good experience', but 'an excellent experience'.

Always travel 'to'  a country, not 'in'  a country: travel to Spain, travel to Sicily.

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My First Lesson ...

I would like to improve my English and i question me to know  I am wondering how to do it !
My English is a  only school English.
In April I am going to Malta with my family to learn English. I hope it will be an good experience !!
We like travels travelling and we went in maroc to Morocco two times twice with our three children. We have use to travel with a 4x4 and on the top of our 4x4 we have installed two houses. on One is for the children and the other is for me and my husband. also We can stop whenever and wherever we want and when we find a lovely place for the night: near a river, in the mountains or in the forest (forêt ..). We love travelling like this travel as it.
I think my English is very bad and also I think I miss a lot of vocabulary. And I am completely lost with the use of the different time tenses: past, preterit (?), ....
Thank you for your help.


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Notes (in addition to John's!):

1.) Se demander = to wonder e.g. Je me demande = I wonder... or I am wondering...

2.) When writing in English, always make sure to capitalise the word 'I', as well as the first letter of a new sentence. 

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thank you Vanessa
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I don't think your English is bad at all! You are doing very well.

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