A good thing in this week.
I got on a bus to go to clinic in this Tuesday.
I got impressed with the bus driver.
For example, he said hello and say goodbye to every passengers when they were getting on and the bus.
When some passengers who gave their seat to the elderly peple, he also thanked to them.
Also, he annouced the arrival time when the bus leaves.
Most bus drivers don't like this, so I felt happy.
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A good thing in this week.
I got on a bus to go to the clinic in this Tuesday.I got was impressed with by the bus driver.
For example, he said hello and say said goodbye to every passengers when as they were getting on and the bus.
When some passengers who gave their seats to the elderly people, he also thanked to them.
Also, he announced the arrival time when the bus leaves left.
Most bus drivers don't aren't like this, so I felt happy.
((Nice job!))
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A good thing in this week. (This sentence is incomplete and isn't very clear.)
Try this: Here's a good experience I had this week. or I want to tell you about something good that happened this week.
I got on a bus to go to a clinic this last Tuesday.I was impressed with the bus driver.
For example, he said, "hello" and say "goodbye" to every passengers when they were getting on and off the bus.
When some passengers who gave their seat to the elderly people, he also thanked to them.
Also, he announced the arrival time of our destination (I added this to make the sentence more clear) when the bus left.
Most bus drivers don't do this, so I felt happy.
Let me know if you have any questions on my corrections and feel free to message me! Keep up the good work!
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