American election and Donald Trump
These days, the majority of the informations that was coming out from the news was about the American election even if I am living in Canada. Maybe, this is because of the controversial dispute between Donald Trump and the Pope. I think its quite interesting to see one of the participants running for presidency of the United States, one of the biggest powerful countries in the world if it is not the biggest to arguing the Pope. Personally, I think it just shows how Trump does not focus on the right things he should take care first to win the elections like finding solid ideas contributing to the improvement of quality of life of every American no matter their nationality whether to only make decisions for people who are afraid of changes, racist or the richest. I don't think is wrong on every aspect. For example, I think his ideas about improving education is not that bad.
Maybe, it is because I am living Quebec in Canada that I think this way. In quebec, education and health care are practically free because every citizen has to pay around 40% to 50% in tax of their total revenu. For what I heard about Bernie Sanders, I think he wants America to become much more a socialist country as Quebec. I think it is a good think in general and maybe, that is why the majority of Bernie Sanders's supporters are young people between 19 to 29. They don't want to have to pay for life long their scholarship and they want a more equal revenu distribution.
Search from various English teachers...
Corrections · 2
1
American election and Donald Trump
These days, the majority of the informations that was is coming out from the news was is about the American election, even if though I am living in Canada. Maybe this is because of the controversial dispute between Donald Trump and the Pope. I think its it's quite interesting to see one of the participants running for presidency of the United States,--one of the biggest, most powerful countries in the world, if it is not the biggest--to be arguing with the Pope. Personally, I think it just shows how Trump does not focus on the right things he should take care first to win the elections, like finding solid ideas contributing to the improvement of the quality of life of every American, no matter their nationality, whether rather than to only make decisions for people who are afraid of changes, racists or the richest. I don't think he is wrong on every aspect. For example, I think his ideas about improving education is are not that bad.Maybe it is because I am living in Quebec, in Canada, that I think this way. In Quebec, education and healthcare are practically free because every citizen has to pay around 40% to 50% in tax of their total revenue. For From what I have heard about Bernie Sanders, I think he wants America to become a much more a socialist country as like Quebec. I think it is a good thing in general and maybe that is why the majority of Bernie Sanders's supporters are young people between 19 to and 29. They don't want to have to pay for life long their scholarship off their loans their entire lives and they want a more equal revenue distribution.
((Great job!! The highlights are things I added or spellings I changed and the strike-throughs are things I would remove.))
Want to progress faster?
Join this learning community and try out free exercises!
Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!
Start Learning Today
