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A very important letter - only a native speaker can help me correct that Firstly, she may ask you about my partners. You should tell her about Daniel and Tom and what they are doing in the project. Secondly, my team is divided into 2 groups ("offices") - the London office and the northern one. The main goal of these groups is providing my project in their areas, i.e. in London and in the northern part of the county. You should say her that I want her to lead the London office. Thirdly, she doesn't lead the London office without payment. That's why I'll pay her ?? per month during a year, i.e. she'll take part in my project. Please let me know if you have any questions, Dmirti

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A very important letter - only a native speaker can help me correct that

Firstly, she may ask you about my business partners. You should tell her about Daniel and Tom and what they are doing in the project their roles in the project.

Secondly, my team is divided comprised of into 2 groups ("offices") - the London office and the northern one. The main goal objective of these groups is to provide support to providing my project in their areas: in London and in the northern part of the county. You should inform her say her that I want would like her to lead the London office.

Thirdly, obviously she won't she doesn't lead the London office without payment. That's why I'll pay her ?? per month during the time period during a year, i.e. she is employed as part in my project.(/Thirdly, compensation. Please inform her that compensation will be set at ??? per month for the duration of her role as the leader of the projects London office.)

Please let me know if you have any questions,

Dmirti
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A very important letter - only a native speaker can help me correct that

Firstly, she may ask you about my partners. You should tell her about Daniel and Tom and what they are doing on the project.

Secondly, my team is divided into 2 groups ("offices") - the London office and the northern one office. The main goal of each of these groups is to provide support for my project in their areas, i.e. in London and in the northern part of the county. You should tell her that I want her to lead the London office.

Thirdly, she doesn't lead the London office without payment. That's why I'll pay her ?? per month during a year, i.e. she'll take part in my project.
I prefer:  Finally, let her know I am prepared to pay her ?? per month for her help on my project.


Please let me know if you have any questions,

Dmirti

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