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Extrange history
One day I was walking around the mountain and sudlenly I heard one noise I could look a lot off people dancing and singing.It was a good suprisse to me. I ate with them and after in fact every body to return again in her particular car. The car flew. I was suprised and alone again.
At the moment I decided to return to civilisation with my family and friends.
A Strange Event (I would suggest this title because it would introduce what you are talking about- something that happened to you- an event, or even you could say experience- most people will not call a past experience a history in English)
One day, I was walking around a mountain.(this means not on the mountain but on the ground around it/ if you mean walking about on the mountain- then you can say" I walk walking on a mountain aimlessly/ or walking around on a mountain) All of a sudden I heard a noise, this made me look around, and I saw a lot of people dancing and singing.
This was a pleasant surprise for me. I ate with them. After, everyone return to their car. The cars quickly drove away. This made me surprised, and again alone. At that moment, I decided to return to the city/ civilization to be with my family and friends.
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