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Chapter 2 / Nineteen Eighty-Four by G. Orwell The first chapter ended when Winston heard a knock on his apartment door thinking that this is Thought Police. It turned out that it was only his neighboor asking for help with a pipe. Thanks to Winston's visit in her flat we can learn more about people presented in the book, especially children. "Nearly all children nowadays were horrible"- thought Winston. The neighboor's kids are part of an organization called the Spies. The name of the organization can tell us a lot about what is its aim. Children love the Party and hate every enemy of it. The Spies indoctrinates children to this level that they are ready to denounce its parents to the Thought Police. The worst for me was that parents are afraid of their own children because they can easily make them hang. The second part of the chapter was about Winston in his apartment. He realize his solitude and hopelessness that his diary may survive for the other generations. The main character decide that he will stay alive as long as possible even thought he recognized himself as a dead man after thoughtcrime. Chapter 2 of the "1984" was a little bit depressing. It deepened my knowledge about society presented, but I hoped that there would happen something more important. ;-)

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Chapter 2 / Nineteen Eighty-Four by G. Orwell

The first chapter ended when Winston heard a knock on his apartment door thinking that this is Thought Police. It turned out that it was only his neighboor asking for help with a pipe. Thanks to Winston's visit in her flat we can learn more about people presented in the book, especially children. "Nearly all children nowadays were horrible"- thought Winston. The neighboor's kids are part of an organization called the Spies. The name of the organization can tell us a lot about what its aims are. Children love the Party and hate every enemy of it. The Spies indoctrinates children to this level (a better word here is effect) that they are ready to denounce its their parents to the Thought Police. The worst for me was that parents are afraid of their own children because they can easily get them hanged.
The second part of the chapter was about Winston in his apartment. (solitude and hopelessness are states of being so they're something that you become aware of) He became aware of his solitude and the hopelessness of whether or not his diary may survive for the other generations. The main character decides that he will stay alive as long as possible even though he recognizes himself as a dead man after his thoughtcrime.

Chapter 2 of the "1984" was a little bit depressing. It deepened my knowledge about the society presented, but I hoped that...

there would happen something more important. ;-)

You can say this a couple different ways:

1. I hoped that there would be something more important happening

2. I hoped that something more important would have happened 

3. I hoped that something that was more important would have happened 


VERY VERY WELL WRITTEN :-D! and trust me the book gets more and more interesting lool

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